Poetry Forum

I would like to apologise to all the members for my behaviour last,too much red wine and a violent arguement with my partner.

woodcutter cut down my shadow. Deliver me from the torment of bearing no fruit. Why was i born among mirrors. Day turns round and round me. And night copies me in all her stars. Let me live unmirrored and then let me dream. that ants andand thistledown are my leaves and my birds. Woodcutter cut down...

o kivraluis,
i love you.

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Sorry I'm such an arrogant little arsehole, but I really am brillliant!

i havent camus,are you the outsider?

who are you the queen?

Is this the best a moderator can do? mediocre and that is an exaggeration.

oh dear another moderator who does'nt know anthing about poetry,well ...,i should look at your poetry,flickerings of promise what do you know?,also who mentioned promotheus.

damn where am,is this a dream?,are there any thieves of fire in here.

well ok,the whole board just seems amateurish to me.

that is a terrible attitude coming from a moderator.

The moderators of this board should be looked at again, I must admit, I have never been so impressed in my life, we really are lucky to have such a great group of people, but this is just my opinion. I'm just so sorry that I'm such an arrogant little twat!

Basically coming from a senior member of this forum,this poem is average,does not display any poetic vision or imagination,banal.

Hi dl04,thanks for your feedback,i like the second verse i wrote,i attempted juxtapostion.

The poem is full of obvious imagery,the poem does not explore the potential of grief,the narrator of the poem appears underwhelmed at his own death.I would cull the poem,removing cliches such as,"red eyes".

yea your right sorry,i will catch up.

does anyone understand the lyrics to visions of johanna by bob dylan,especially this line-in the museum infinity goes on trial

i have read that kind of poetry it leaves me cold,how about you?

hi i never send my stuff to magazines,they must get hundreds of submissions,thanks for help.

lk;lk

Who said the manuscript was mine? also i do'nt like tone of your message.

hi i need some advice,does anyone on the forum know how many poems are needed to make a manuscript.Has anyone sumitted a manuscript to a publisher?,if they did what happened.thank you

someone compared by poetry to the french symbolists rimbaud and appollinaire,i am not sure if this is a compliment.

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