Poetry Forum

oh, thanks, had no clue how to turn that off

thank you for the advise, most of the capitalizing is because Microsoft word automatically does it, but I do see what you mean about old phrases and capitalizations. I will keep your advise in mind

She'd gotten me to write again, lace lips Half silenced still with golden embroidery, and this Time no word or outpouring of emotion will be "Enough". The silent blackness, it all Just goes And goes. Beyond the see through Doors and swing sets full of growling Dogs; he said he liked her sm...

It is a rather humorous tale, but as has been said, it does seem to be too bunched together an seems more like a prose rather than a poem; maybe writing it like this He ingratiated himself, with talk of traditional flooring, of cornice And capice, of cheap window washing. I was smitten. I liked his ...

Both versions of the poem are really good, both having beautiful and clear imagery, though the edited version seems more natural.

Umm.... not much to say I think... My name is Jeaneva I'm 21 years old from clevelnd, ohio... I've been writing poems for around five or six years,not going to sy how good or bad they are, but they -are- odd. I don't read many poets, but I do like a few of Sylvia Plath's and Robert Frost's and such....