Poetry Forum

Thanks for the replies, I have messed with it a bit, I just took some bulk out, since longer stuff, I just can't get all the words in right, heh. Anyway, I'll edit the first post I guess and you can take another look. I'll be around a lot more tomorrow, Saturdays are busy for me, so I'll check out s...

I usually don't write longer things, and I see what you are saying. The first part is probably just for audience knowledge, usually on Sundays I read some of myself, and some people were saying my writings are a bit short, so I tried to expand. One of my hardest things with a longer piece, is when r...

Just something I've been working on for a bit. A bit long yes, yet hope you enjoy it.\ -> (Revision) The Fact of Magic In awe, people wondered about its start Where it began, how it came to be Physically impossible, Mentally unsound By all means out of ones grasp Always un-replicable by the viewer's...

Hello there. I like the simplicity of this, The first Stanza has a strict meaning it seems. In the second, it almost looks like an aabb format for the end, with may and away, pain and again. Yet the again doesn't fit as well for me. Yet it does work. The last two lines are very nice. Especially the ...

Hey there aru, I like the imagery of the first paragraph. The first line hits a point to me that was when I started to work and personal experience. Six dreary years have expanded calluses - This in itself drew me in, before anything, I then started to read though and liked how it connects back to t...