Poetry Forum

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i can' get enough of jerome k jerome, james hogg as mentioned, private memoirs is top of the pops in the creepy stakes, diary of a nobody any day of the week, hunger by knut hamsun, had to lie down for 3 days after struggling through this one, a soft diet, mostly chicken soup soon brought back some ...

i loved her,
she talked and talked and talked,
i didn't love her,
she walked and walked and walked,,
i miss her,
her talk, her walk, her socks.

nice one leigh, if i was god, scotland would win the world cup, celtic would win the champions league, bibs, the five-a-side team i play in goals for on a thursday night, would win the power league division 2 title this season. but? i'm not god and it''s all wishful thinking, it'll never happen, BIB...

hi dave
i hope you like it?
dan

thanks geoff, a cheeky wee solo would be perfect in there.
dan

hi marten
think it's just the distortion you can hear, it's a longer song, more verses but this is all that's recorded.
thanks for listening
dan

good point jon, thanks for reading it and for the advice, it is pretty daunting, needs a little pause here and there.
dan

in strange fields their minds run free, passed the border passed sanity? lost in secrets, trapped, alone their thoughts, their dreams, allowed to roam, inside their heads, in tiny ships, there's laughter and tears, and pleasure trips, outside it's cold in here it's warm, in here you're safe, from th...

sample i was concieved against a wall fucking followed, alcohol five furious minutes out in the cold he paid his money your cunt was sold i hear the humping every night i see the bruises after fights you hide me from your midnight guests i hear you ask what's your request the minister he comes to pr...

hi marten
don't have a clue what the song is about but really enjoyed the trip!
great sounds, thought i was going to hear canned heat's on the road again at the start?
nice re-working, voice sounded more sure.
excellent download.
dan

neat and tidy cooper. good wee read, that's how the world is sometimes, pretty sad.
dan

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hXY_CaVvnPU

super happy canned heat, shaky vid,trippy colours, puts a smile on your face, peace and love, man!

very funny lyrics k-j, i like it, add a little tune?
good stuff
dan

quite right david, the robins sung it, later becoming the coasters, leiber and stoller number, those guys could knock out a lyric!
love alex and his band, entertainers.
dan

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FG6aLs8zzrs

Sensational Alex Harvey Band

Framed, enjoy!

a rough night dalena? brutal portrayal of a hopeless and luckless lady. really grim but you write it with such class.
cheers
dan

thanks marty, very encouraging! never heard of the church, will check those lads out.
thanks again
dan

arunansu, this is a beautiful letter, your dad is very proud of your brother's imminent passing out, another step in his life as a man.there are a lot of stories on these pages of wild, fantastic tales, some good, some bad? but this little slice from your family history is by far one of the most tou...

enjoyable wee yarn, good atmosphere created through the tale, i'll sleep with all the lights on now!cheers Raisin.
dan

thanks for listening Lake, glad you liked it, scream was just a little bit of nonsense.
dan

thanks for comments pitseleh, it's very 80's sounding. it's a cold sounding song about an even colder subject.
cheers dan

The City Is Burning Tonight a cheery little ditty with the added words of ed kemper at the death, sorry, end. my heart is black and it's filled with hate i want you now and i just can't wait, i see you put on your favourite dress i'll never have you 'cos my skin is a mess i stand at the back in shad...

now with added song!

talented chap. very nice Dante.
dan