Poetry Forum

my girlfriend doesn't live in my town, but it's not only the distance inbetween the concrete and rail track that gives me concern. it's the distance between our minds, she's young and still learning the way of the world, i'm older and i know i never will stop learning, things don't just happen by cl...

i've been in this situation before. loving two people at the same time. it's tough, but wonderful at the same time.

"what counts for more, time or lust"
summed it all up there.

thanks.
just getting my feet wet now.

Really good first line and, to me, wriggles suggest the 'criminal' is desperately trying to prove his innocence.

it didn't go down to well around here, you could say.
my boss was devastated.

a little rugby town, much like yours.
widnes.

I'm Mark, i'm 25, and i've been writing for a good few years now. I live near Liverpool, it always rains.
so just wanted to say hi.