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shadows are uncast

haha very nice
i dig the way the rhythm changes towards the end
don't forget the end quotation mark!

She walks in the shadow
sneaking past her
father's door

Through the rush of the day And the cool of the night Life goes on sometimes like a sad portrait painted with dark colours with tears and blood of those who hunted for peace and freedom everywhere but in themselves who lost there lives searching for a treasure then lie in peace in their back yard wh...

every lunchtime
he eats a tuna sandwich
every lunchtime

i turned it broke glittering

Laugh not, fear not, speak not, hear not, Close up the bell towers, Lock up the old powers, Do not trust others. Love not, tear not. Hide not in the shadows, Peer not from chalky eyes, If you hate the world you live in, Do not stay your cry. Rattle all the coffins, Break open all the doors, Set fire...

what is this

i really enjoyed

verse two !