Poetry Forum

Its a loaded poem. Well written and with nice pacing. I wonder if a poem that makes reference to music should have a more musical 'read' (or feel) to it. Such a vivid picture, though. I really like this poem.

This is a well written 'poem of the day' - one that fills the notebook as if it were a journal entry. Posting and or verbalizing criticism has always been a little tough for me, but I'd say the last line needs a little work. I loved the bit about the beard in the beginning, and thought maybe you mig...