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ok barrie, sorry about that! I can be a little dense at times.

Thanks for the heads up!

Yeah , must admit this does seem a little short and sweet. But it does leave the mind wondering....

Hi mate,

Cool poem. I particularly liked the last 2 lines. Its been a while since Ive been to manchester.

Hi guys

hope all is well. I am new to the board and thought I would introduce myself,

My name is Dave. I am new to poetry. Ive posted a poem I wrote about war here viewtopic.php?f=20&t=8448

Cheers

desolate thoughts circle this barren land a billion lonely souls walk hand in hand splintered trepidation, the reaper grows near Echoes fall silent , cries of help disappear Distorted screams storm his swirling senses, as the stench of death infiltrates his bloody nostrils. His eyes flicker open, th...