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- Fri May 30, 2014 6:13 pm
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: Maya Angelou
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2452
Re: Maya Angelou
There's a few moments of beautiful rhythm or lucid expression in there - some solid post-Spiritual lyric. More significant as a civil rights activist though, it's fair to say!
- Fri Mar 21, 2014 3:25 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Welwyn
- Replies: 7
- Views: 1680
Re: Welwyn
Currently it's produced the below - Muses, let me sing of love of my land; no rage nor wand'ring, just old lies made true by the walking of vales, my right hand upon the steel gate to pastures new. Slopes beneath the shattered house never seen, showpiece lakes across from an aerodrome I've never flo...
- Sun Mar 16, 2014 2:29 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Boundaries (v.2)
- Replies: 17
- Views: 2881
Re: Boundaries (v.2)
Fantastic revision of the last stanza.
- Sat Mar 15, 2014 5:05 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: In praise of one without second
- Replies: 32
- Views: 7476
Re: In praise of one without second
I would echo this. To be a glorious failure is still to be glorious.Ros wrote:I agree it's the 'thing' that makes this unique - but still not totally convinced... I like the idea of exploring losing identity further, though.
- Sat Mar 15, 2014 4:29 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Two words from a private vocabulary
- Replies: 11
- Views: 1911
Re: Two words from a private vocabulary
All-round excellent, especially "The past is coming unstuck in my hands" and the personification of hackett as (like unto) Hereward the Wake in his fens.
- Sat Mar 15, 2014 3:14 pm
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: Les Murray - An Absolutely Ordinary Rainbow
- Replies: 6
- Views: 5198
Re: Les Murray - An Absolutely Ordinary Rainbow
I suppose that his understanding of our common need for weeping is informed by his faith. I rather meant by "reverse Geoffrey Hill" that Les becomes easier to read in his later work, where Hill becomes progressively harder til eventually you rather imagine he's working with the Navaho code...
- Sat Mar 15, 2014 2:08 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: In praise of one without second
- Replies: 32
- Views: 7476
Re: In praise of one without second
I think the "-thing" thing is a glorious failure. I appreciate the intent, applaud its consistency, but cannot say I believe it succeeded.
- Sat Mar 15, 2014 1:45 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Welwyn
- Replies: 7
- Views: 1680
Re: Welwyn
Lots of helpful feedback. Gardens/shuns stinks, and the final couplet is vague to the point of obtusity. Renaming the poem may help, or may confuse further - "Panshanger House", right beside my family home - which was sold and knocked down like Brideshead in the 1950s, partly as 2 of its 3...
- Sat Mar 15, 2014 1:20 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: After All (For Tony Benn)
- Replies: 2
- Views: 980
After All (For Tony Benn)
And after all, was it for nothing that you withstood the din the last Bacchalic fling of a declining era's sins? And after all, was it no nobility to withstand blood's siege and surrender privilege out of noblesse oblige? And after all, as the pygmies rule on every side, was it a crime to be our las...
- Mon Mar 10, 2014 11:12 pm
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: Les Murray - An Absolutely Ordinary Rainbow
- Replies: 6
- Views: 5198
Re: Les Murray - An Absolutely Ordinary Rainbow
This one came up in that essay I mentioned, David. Absolutely crackerjack poem, typical of early Murray in his expression being a little more circumlocutive (he's the reverse Geoffrey Hill).
- Mon Mar 10, 2014 8:36 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: All mortal things
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2554
Re: All mortal things
Oh, I liked this more than the others I think - I can't say I understood it but it had a romping element to its language and rhythm that worked well for me. I think with a revision of the weak s3 and a tighter/clearer s4 this could be very good.
- Mon Mar 10, 2014 8:32 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Boundaries (v.2)
- Replies: 17
- Views: 2881
Re: Boundaries
Loved the matted fur of the bus seat, multilayered poetic image that works well at each of them. Probably my favourite bit. I think I'm trying to identify whether the voice's anxieties are to be taken purely existentially - in which case the "vehicle" of the bus ride felt like a bit of a s...
- Tue Mar 04, 2014 2:57 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Welwyn
- Replies: 7
- Views: 1680
Welwyn
Muses, let me sing of love of my land; no rage nor wand'ring, just old lies made true by the walking of vales, my right hand upon the steel gate to pastures new. Slopes beneath the shattered house never seen, showpiece lakes across from an aerodrome I've never flown from, pubs I've never been - God'...
- Thu Feb 28, 2013 4:44 pm
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: Lucid Rhythms
- Replies: 15
- Views: 4185
Re: Lucid Rhythms
And the issue they're in is up at last, after being forgotten from 2012-2!
http://lucidrhythms.com/2013-1/Edwards_Owen.htm
http://lucidrhythms.com/2013-1/Edwards_Owen.htm
- Mon Jul 16, 2012 7:36 pm
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: The Delinquent
- Replies: 18
- Views: 3792
Re: The Delinquent
Hurrah, hurrah! Congratulations.
- Sun Jul 15, 2012 10:21 pm
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: Lucid Rhythms
- Replies: 15
- Views: 4185
Re: Lucid Rhythms
Congrats, Jane!
I just got three poems accepted for their next - Rain, New Digs, and An Anthropologist in Durham.
I just got three poems accepted for their next - Rain, New Digs, and An Anthropologist in Durham.
- Mon Mar 19, 2012 9:48 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Black Country Evangelicals
- Replies: 18
- Views: 2934
Re: Black Country Evangelicals
Excellent stuff.
- Thu Mar 01, 2012 12:55 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Snowfall
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1337
Re: Snowfall
Peter: Thanks so much for the encouragement; I think you and Ray have zeroed in on the chief weakness, and I'm grateful, so I'll be sure to work on it. Nash: Not intentionally reflecting Peredur/Percival, but it was intended as a way of etching Gary more firmly as one of Virgil's dispossessed, noble...
- Fri Feb 24, 2012 4:32 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Snowfall
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1337
Re: Snowfall
Thanks for the crit Ray; you're probably right on all points. I quite like the octameter in the middle, though...
- Fri Feb 24, 2012 4:31 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Higgs the poet
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2740
Re: Higgs the poet
Marc, I didn't assume it was actually particularly to do with (a) God; I was more commenting on the trope God/Word/poetry/beginning.
- Thu Feb 23, 2012 4:01 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Higgs the poet
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2740
Re: The God Poetical
Ant, space is empty but also very full
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Marc, I like this. I don't think it's an entirely original gambit - God as poet by his word/Word, allowing the poet to claim poetry as divine - but it's well executed.
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Marc, I like this. I don't think it's an entirely original gambit - God as poet by his word/Word, allowing the poet to claim poetry as divine - but it's well executed.
- Thu Feb 23, 2012 3:49 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Snowfall
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1337
Snowfall
I must confess I've never enjoyed snow - indeed, I have rather been one of those awkward children who shy away from fights dancing in the snow, playing til the night, constructing amusing carrot-nosed men, sledding down precipitous hills and then laughing like a glad fool at the bottom. I finally co...
- Mon Feb 20, 2012 11:05 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Uncle Harry
- Replies: 18
- Views: 3323
Re: Uncle Harry
re David and Ant - well, I like it. Of course I don't think Brian's right in his views about religion (indeed, I think they're balmy in terms of the vituperation) but that central hymn to the wonder of nature is magnificent. Poetry feels, to me, at some level, an opportunity for different voices to ...
- Thu Feb 02, 2012 5:21 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Skinchanger
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1963
Re: Skinchanger
Wally: Thanks for the response! A nice comparison the onion there; that (to make others cry!) and steelskin are certainly other skins we wear. I'll take into consideration your comment on the conclusion, and see if it can be made more surprising. Nash: Astute observations, all; the fullstop after ba...
- Thu Feb 02, 2012 5:09 pm
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: Obsessed with Pipework
- Replies: 11
- Views: 3109
Re: Obsessed with Pipework
I submitted to the Flarestacks Poet pamphlet comp, which is associated with OWP, but not run by the same (palmistry-supporting) fellow.