Poetry Forum

I don't know to much on "Pinter" so so say, he just gave up and "found himself". Some times negative is best left alone perhaps this is (Pinterish) in his sacromonios honesty of trying to half-wit man into a more delusional world of which he already lives in? But your not Pinter....

Nice old truth brought new again and there's a tone of authenticity about it, a springful youth. You kept the decency to hold back:
but we all know of them you know, have no fear in that.

The way to go


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Where do angels sleep? is it beneath heaven's dome? Heaven so cool and bright angels have their home Who can judge a stone but light how could darkness know? Wisdom, the creator of light, have faith in this to know Light of man, light of love, but one heart is of gold, one half made in silver the ot...

There is a Great Light which stands tall when suffering pangs the heart and the mighty with their swords make small of a lonely heart what is gained with power if the soul is lost why climb the Babel Tower it lies in the dust where power-hungry men and merchants fought where now they lay in waste lo...

I know its been said before but there's some good thoughts here they only need to say what you want to
say to form a more solid picture at the moment they sem to be in the ether .

Dave

To be totally adjacent here should we not aim to express by simplicity especially when expressing in poetry? I tried to connect with it but got lost along the way. Better I feel the last line is.........."onto the pages she vacuumed packed faces" I think we're all emotions and bundles of n...

A bit short here methinks there are so many topics on 2012: planet nibiru, mayan end long count calendrical date for end of world ets etc.

Try some backlog it's interesting and it would help you to a better involved construcion about this date and others

Dave

The distance of eyes is why she cries to me

TDF brliant.

You have projected feelings beautifully.

Proud to know you really.

REM this would be proud by them.........

I thought I saw you cry...........

Thanks

I think David had it right that is. From my honest self it rips and does it rip. I have gone into her several times and it still rips for me. Nice. Honest. You have the ability to let rip.......... Dave I guess.......nice to know you PS: I mean David not me he is the guy he rips so wonderful take hi...

Is there any chance of hot too? Strikes power notes which do take off into floats as etheric loads. You made feelings well away from your chest. I won't falt it and can not even if I wanted to ...it is of soul-mystery which only we can unfold ourselves I guess...........there is a nice ring about th...

Thank you Sir. I am still working on her but in mine I feel I need to let her go now. (The poem). Perhaps it's the only way .... To say I think I really like you you have given to it which failed to do. I honestly I like you I really do. Call me want you want to but my heart sincere as years go by.....

Dear friends and peoples: It came to this very hour ago Its not perfect but I thought I just let it rip from my heart...........sorry. There are levels in poetry methinks... the great masters of poetry and verse "keats" is to mind: but how they attuned to these inspirations has always delu...

These years pass on by warm as my love for you you can't deny your heart when fled all needs love without which we're dead...... as years pass on by. (rip) Stilll ripping in the heart's gripping You still tripping for a coke you know your nose now is a joke as the bleeding passes our noses by I know...

Thanks for your kind reply yea I got it wrong you are right Satriani is still
our light.

Thank you for this. I always have said to my wife when "Satriani dies I will
be dead soon after" ----------live on friend please.

Dear Gavin, I have some issues on my mind at the moment a witness to a murder trial nothing to do with me just wrong time wrong place. I hope I can be articulate enough as the poet in me is to say what I saw. However, lets have a look at this: "Autumn blush and she is the sky" this is nice...

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Hi You

What, he ripped through waves
this soul a living octave
his memory still haunts and chants.


Not unlike Garry "the blues for you"
this guy is as as true
got the meaning for you

but where is my sorry tune?

My honest friend you'll get there in the end.

Sorry.

Negative and positive eperiences are what we're left; good or bad.

This is sad

A different look into the light and darkness of life here. I liked the honest approach here and the giving of yours thoughts: it's heavy. "so where was is my mother's daddy said share thoughts with others and stay in bed............. all of life the endless sceme to prevent our dreams non zeaol...

The stress this pain mother mary It's my life I ain't living forever Mother in this strife constantly avoiding a knife. Fiery catherine wheels spin in this heart while jewels await in silence apart, alive, inflorescent bursts forth a Cain with Able when he murderd his brother in shame, and drove hum...

Where is any depth in this? Another forsaken love whom cared not and was ripped of.


If you're to change (those indifferent themes ) you need your dreams in peace.

"split the peace split your head" This can not be peacefully said.

"The sqeezing seepage" what? " "But you must tell me" tell me what? and "Wait ,wait the essence of modern poetry". What does it say but "things happen"...... nice in a way sometimes negative too much as fission inside.........the atoms we in self hide. Kn...

Like the "title". I like the way it writes reminds me of myself years back. Feelings. Me for one felt you epressed it well........but not quite. To mix abstract extension of consciousness with mundane existing on earth is a hard ride even for 'Gandi' for all things must change all the time...

Thanks Nar for your concern and kind thought.