Poetry Forum

"Do you feel horny?"
If that is all you have got
then find better lines.

Behind Stonehenge?
No! On the center altar!
Your sacrifice waits.

Hi, Summersky

Papa's garden hat
hangs quietly on the hook,
his damp spade soiled.

These are beautiful haiku. I liked the number II best. It felt very lonely, I think you did a good job. Summersky

I enjoy writing haiku, too. This one is very well written. It was a pleasure to read, it takes the reader to a quiet place.
Summersky

Blue hazed garden path,
anxious tick of his old clock,
papa's not coming.

Hi jonjonjon
I liked the way this sounded. It's interesting. Summersky

. Summersky