Poetry Forum

Thanks for the replies guys!

Yeah, I didn't like "lo" either, but I couldn't think of anything that would fit better. Most of the poetry I've read is Victorian also, hence the capitals, so I'll make a note to read some more modern stuff for inspiration. Thanks again!

Karen

I haven't read any Rankin, but I'm glad there's some Pratchett fans on this site! He's fantastic (literally :?), Making Money , one of his most recent works, I think was my favourite of all of his Discworld novels, although I'm sure a lot of fans will disagree with me! When you look back at his earl...

Love this. Othello is probably my favourite Shakespeare play, and this is a great twist on it. A great "what if?" - lots of backround to think about once it's considered! It also feels very modern too, which I like, and which is interesting when it's about Shakespearean characters, but I t...

Whisper, The calm is quiet. See there a tiny Clownfish peeks up From his comfortable bed, And lo, An angelfish plays In slow-breathing rocks, All dotted pink. Stay now, Time holds little rule When our eyes are the Only remnants Of our shadowy bodies, Given up to the dark, And peace, Instilled by the...