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by kattie
Sun May 03, 2009 3:33 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: Mirror Mirror on the wall.
Replies: 8
Views: 1640

Mirror Mirror on the wall.

I crave for my figure to be emaciated. A shrunken shriveled withered physique. Is what I aspire. When my ribs protrude I feel euphoric. But am I really? Aching for the feeling of hunger. I am in control. The scale reading regulates everything. Skin and bones. All the baby fat gone. Only heavy under ...
by kattie
Sun May 03, 2009 3:27 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: In the Mix
Replies: 8
Views: 1808

Re: In the Mix

Holds me, holds me close like a Mother should. I really like this line

Im not really sure what the mixture is symbolizing though.
by kattie
Sun May 03, 2009 3:25 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: end waste.
Replies: 7
Views: 1729

Re: end waste.

I understand your topic but I think it lacks the structure of a poem.