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- Sun May 03, 2009 3:33 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Mirror Mirror on the wall.
- Replies: 8
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Mirror Mirror on the wall.
I crave for my figure to be emaciated. A shrunken shriveled withered physique. Is what I aspire. When my ribs protrude I feel euphoric. But am I really? Aching for the feeling of hunger. I am in control. The scale reading regulates everything. Skin and bones. All the baby fat gone. Only heavy under ...
- Sun May 03, 2009 3:27 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: In the Mix
- Replies: 8
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Re: In the Mix
Holds me, holds me close like a Mother should. I really like this line
Im not really sure what the mixture is symbolizing though.
Im not really sure what the mixture is symbolizing though.
- Sun May 03, 2009 3:25 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: end waste.
- Replies: 7
- Views: 1729
Re: end waste.
I understand your topic but I think it lacks the structure of a poem.