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by dennis32
Wed Jun 24, 2009 9:51 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: Lullaby.
Replies: 6
Views: 1245

Re: Lullaby.

i am very new to writing, but i did enjoy reading it, was very smooth and flowed nice, and its all about learning for me, so its nice to read other pieces here, and see how i can improve my own writing :D
by dennis32
Wed Jun 24, 2009 9:47 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: fraggle, my dog
Replies: 3
Views: 832

fraggle, my dog

ife can be very precious and valuable to some to others it means nothing it's a chore and never fun for me life is a struggle a constant demon always near my emotions were never normal was common to shed a tear it was my little furry friend who provided me with light and without her affection my day...
by dennis32
Wed Jun 24, 2009 9:40 am
Forum: Hello, Good Evening and Welcome
Topic: hello from down under
Replies: 3
Views: 1498

Re: hello from down under

i keep a small notebook of what i write, and it is enjoyable to look back at what i have created, i have never been to much of a writer so doing this gives me immense satisfaction, its very enjoyable, very relaxing
by dennis32
Wed Jun 24, 2009 8:25 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: the darkness
Replies: 13
Views: 2610

Re: the darkness

yes,,its all appreciated, thankyou
by dennis32
Tue Jun 23, 2009 10:33 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: the darkness
Replies: 13
Views: 2610

Re: the darkness

thankyou, and i do agree, it would be a better ending, its nice to get some feedback, its appreciated
by dennis32
Tue Jun 23, 2009 8:28 pm
Forum: Hello, Good Evening and Welcome
Topic: Hello
Replies: 11
Views: 3030

Re: Hello

am very new here myself, so very nice to meet u maria
by dennis32
Tue Jun 23, 2009 8:27 pm
Forum: Hello, Good Evening and Welcome
Topic: hello from down under
Replies: 3
Views: 1498

hello from down under

hi all, i am a 34 year old from australia, i am very new to writing , i have battled severe depression most of my adult life, and have only recently started writing on a blog, it seems to help me get all my frustrations and feelings out in the open for others to read. i recently tried my hand at poe...
by dennis32
Tue Jun 23, 2009 8:23 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: the darkness
Replies: 13
Views: 2610

Re: the darkness

yes 4 sure i will, still figuring out how it works here, but will make sure i do all the correct things here, :)
by dennis32
Tue Jun 23, 2009 3:02 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: the darkness
Replies: 13
Views: 2610

Re: the darkness

thankyou lovely, am all very new to this, so still learning the ropes,
by dennis32
Tue Jun 23, 2009 1:22 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: the darkness
Replies: 13
Views: 2610

the darkness

the darkness arrives so quick, and enters at any time it can unlock any door, and it appears at all hours, it doesnt pick or choose, its never fussy, it feels like a mask, pulled over your face, to suffocate you, it blocks your emotions, your feelings, and darkens the room, closing the windows, and ...