RACHEL
Much better.. and it really does improve it.
Well done.
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SEAN KINSELLA
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- Mon Oct 31, 2005 9:11 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Poem
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2811
- Mon Oct 31, 2005 8:13 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Threshold
- Replies: 20
- Views: 6032
KEITH If you don't feel the need to bother then don't... but as you did... I was spoken to disparagingly, and without due cause. I don't believe for one second Cameron would appreciate me dismissing the entire canon of his work in similar terms. I didn't mention the radio until such time. I understa...
- Mon Oct 31, 2005 7:49 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Threshold
- Replies: 20
- Views: 6032
CAMERON So because I don't write in your kind of style I can't write on here at all? Perhaps you need to check your 'Constructive Criticism' Guidelines? I'm not particularly inspired by Kipling or Keats incidentally You don't like me do you? (NB I have nothing against you) And you'd just as soon I w...
- Mon Oct 31, 2005 6:37 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Threshold
- Replies: 20
- Views: 6032
- Mon Oct 31, 2005 6:03 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Threshold
- Replies: 20
- Views: 6032
- Mon Oct 31, 2005 4:51 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Threshold
- Replies: 20
- Views: 6032
CAM No problem, we're here to be honest, but free verse (and I'm convinced of this), is something I just can't do as well as say, Arcadian Caleb or Leslie. I'm inspired by the old-fashioned language and poets, even if modern poetry is not, so there you go. We might have discussed archaic writing sty...
- Mon Oct 31, 2005 4:44 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Untitled
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1726
- Mon Oct 31, 2005 4:34 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Threshold
- Replies: 20
- Views: 6032
- Mon Oct 31, 2005 4:22 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Threshold
- Replies: 20
- Views: 6032
Threshold
THRESHOLD Late at night, I am the only light blazing alone at opaque black baited by unbreakable glass and taunted, I await the dawn, for time to enlarge the horizon like a photograph taken yesterday tinged with fickle yellow. Faces flood my empty sea I drown in moments that have died and silhouett...
- Mon Oct 31, 2005 1:20 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: No need for time
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1770
- Mon Oct 31, 2005 1:11 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Poem
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2811
- Mon Oct 31, 2005 1:02 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Untitled
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1726
BIAA Thanks for posting your poetry It would have helped however, had you titled it, as after reading it 5 times I'm still none the wiser. Is some of it to do with materialism, depression or parentally governed issues maybe? Can you explain it?... That's a genuine request not a sarcastic one , as th...
- Mon Oct 31, 2005 12:49 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: A mountain peddler’s faire
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1731
- Mon Oct 31, 2005 12:42 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Death in France
- Replies: 11
- Views: 3038
- Sun Oct 30, 2005 8:34 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Victoria's Garden State.
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1191
- Sun Oct 30, 2005 7:52 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: .
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1443
- Sun Oct 30, 2005 7:42 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: The rope swing
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1819
- Sun Oct 30, 2005 7:35 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Cold Caller - Revised Again (01/11/05)
- Replies: 22
- Views: 7792
- Sun Oct 30, 2005 7:29 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: The Humbling Homeless
- Replies: 16
- Views: 5197
- Sun Oct 30, 2005 7:12 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Death in France
- Replies: 11
- Views: 3038
- Sun Oct 30, 2005 5:47 pm
- Forum: Hello, Good Evening and Welcome
- Topic: Sean Kinsella
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2636
CAM Many thanks for what you said and the advice you gave. I am in the position you described at the close of your post - ie publisher charging me over £15 per poem every time I'm accepted in one of their anthologies. It's got to the point where I'm just unable to afford it anymore. Interesting... I...
- Sun Oct 30, 2005 6:18 am
- Forum: Hello, Good Evening and Welcome
- Topic: Sean Kinsella
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2636
Sean Kinsella
I was born in Romford Essex in 1963, but grew up in Swansea South Wales. I read History and Biblical Studies at Swansea and Sheffield respectively, and I've worked in the Prison Service, DVLA and Royal Mail. I've lived in Chesterfield for the last nine years, and have been married to Sue since Augus...
- Thu Oct 27, 2005 4:04 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: All Consuming
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1206
- Thu Oct 27, 2005 4:01 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Langland Bay
- Replies: 17
- Views: 4254
- Thu Aug 25, 2005 5:59 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Langland Bay
- Replies: 17
- Views: 4254