Search found 13 matches
- Mon Jul 17, 2006 12:07 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Cancer Of The City
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2923
- Mon Jul 17, 2006 12:03 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: I Am Lying
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1323
- Wed Feb 08, 2006 11:06 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Grounded
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1388
hmmm soem gd points. Thge eyebrows should be eyelashes seems amazingly obvious now. The 'Ten' was intentionally capitalised to try and put some emphasis on the split personality that a person often seems to develop after a fall from grace. With regards to the eye emphasis, the underlying theme of th...
- Mon Feb 06, 2006 11:33 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Grounded
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1388
Grounded
He held himself, so his knees were worn on the dirty floor. Pushed down to the ground, back to the start. “Get up” she declared, as her eyes pierced through his. Stand tall, look the world in the eye. “Cant you see I'm trying?” he retorted, as he merged his cheek with the dark, damp mud. His hips co...
- Mon Feb 06, 2006 11:33 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Life is not a competition
- Replies: 1
- Views: 739
Life is not a competition
Give me another cliché, help me feel validated, underrated, understated. Such a competition, this rat raced, fat faced world of yours. Another critic, insecurities masked behind 'gratifying' sarcasm. YES! You found a weakness! A flaw! Your chance to shine! Use your cutthroat wit, dominate yet anothe...
- Thu Jan 26, 2006 8:57 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: The boldness of London
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1089
- Wed Jan 25, 2006 5:34 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: The boldness of London
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1089
The boldness of London
The Boldness of London The Boldness of London. STOP. GO. WALK. WAIT. So much pointless anguish, on such a pointless place So keep your Eyes and your Domes do with them what you will, for you gain no real insight, from these structures made of steel. Look away, while your children play, on your price...
- Sun May 08, 2005 8:44 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Icarus
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1112
- Wed May 04, 2005 8:55 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Icarus
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1112
Icarus
Spin wheel of time, but keep me in my age, Do you want me to change, or waste my life dreaming? Ah, but you cannot keep me! I have a plan. A quick Fix to escape, time will awake, but I will arise. So I run, jump out from meniality to Soar above the hoards. A smile greets my face, but look ahead One,...
- Tue May 03, 2005 3:58 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Chavs? (explicit)
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1468
- Mon May 02, 2005 8:54 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: "Tooting Town on Friday"
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1791
- Sat Apr 30, 2005 9:04 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: "Tooting Town on Friday"
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1791
- Sat Apr 30, 2005 6:53 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: "Tooting Town on Friday"
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1791
"Tooting Town on Friday"
Hi my names James Conlon from London and here’s a poem from a collection which I have been writing. Any thoughts would be appreciated Tooting town on Friday Out come the cries of grey, black and blue. A man looks down on the mountain But there’s nothing the mountain can do. There’s a rain in the air...