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- Fri Apr 26, 2024 8:55 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Things That Won't Stop Until They Stop
- Replies: 4
- Views: 34
Re: Things That Won't Stop Until They Stop
Things That Won’t Stop Until They Stop My heart won’t stop doing the jitterbug. I’m not sure why it’s so much alive, constantly moving like a hyperactive child. This is my old age, time to relax, so why is part of me always at a dance? It needs to conserve itself for important things, like when tha...
- Fri Apr 26, 2024 8:37 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Boat Trip
- Replies: 4
- Views: 39
Re: Boat Trip
Agree with Kris on the excellent ending, though perhaps a quieter touch on the sibilance and canopy/haphazardly/floaty could do with one less. Liked the shimmer of cars and buses, lets hope the summer haze comes soon!
- Fri Apr 26, 2024 2:18 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: RECULVER TOWERS
- Replies: 1
- Views: 18
Re: RECULVER TOWERS
Hi Tristan
Like this angle on coastal/climate change, and the human history of the place was a rewarding google. A thread of Ozymandais came to mind too, though technology retains our 'ghosts'. Like the silt simile. Will be back!
Thanks for sharing!
Phil
Like this angle on coastal/climate change, and the human history of the place was a rewarding google. A thread of Ozymandais came to mind too, though technology retains our 'ghosts'. Like the silt simile. Will be back!
Thanks for sharing!
Phil
- Thu Apr 25, 2024 9:50 am
- Forum: Music and Song Lyric Discussion
- Topic: The Chain
- Replies: 3593
- Views: 350595
- Thu Apr 25, 2024 9:10 am
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: Ray and Phil in Flight of the Dragonfly
- Replies: 8
- Views: 50
Re: Ray and Phil in Flight of the Dragonfly
Champions League next season!
- Thu Apr 25, 2024 3:20 am
- Forum: Music and Song Lyric Discussion
- Topic: The Chain
- Replies: 3593
- Views: 350595
- Wed Apr 24, 2024 7:54 pm
- Forum: Music and Song Lyric Discussion
- Topic: The Chain
- Replies: 3593
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- Wed Apr 24, 2024 11:13 am
- Forum: Music and Song Lyric Discussion
- Topic: The Chain
- Replies: 3593
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- Wed Apr 24, 2024 7:25 am
- Forum: Music and Song Lyric Discussion
- Topic: The Chain
- Replies: 3593
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- Tue Apr 23, 2024 6:53 pm
- Forum: Music and Song Lyric Discussion
- Topic: The Chain
- Replies: 3593
- Views: 350595
- Tue Apr 23, 2024 2:17 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Homecoming
- Replies: 6
- Views: 77
Re: Homecoming
I like the tone of the poem.
- Tue Apr 23, 2024 5:58 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Homecoming
- Replies: 6
- Views: 77
Re: Homecoming
I have to confess, I'm not that interested in God Caleb.
- Mon Apr 22, 2024 1:39 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Homecoming
- Replies: 6
- Views: 77
Re: Homecoming
I'm glad they wander again. I feel it is human to wander.
- Mon Apr 22, 2024 1:35 pm
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: A poem that I read today by Mac
- Replies: 338
- Views: 62112
- Sat Apr 20, 2024 2:38 am
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: New poem in Amethyst Review!
- Replies: 4
- Views: 29
Re: New poem in Amethyst Review!
Congratulations John. The champagne has been delivered at PP
- Fri Apr 19, 2024 2:30 pm
- Forum: Music and Song Lyric Discussion
- Topic: The Chain
- Replies: 3593
- Views: 350595
- Fri Apr 19, 2024 7:49 am
- Forum: Music and Song Lyric Discussion
- Topic: The Chain
- Replies: 3593
- Views: 350595
- Fri Apr 19, 2024 6:21 am
- Forum: Music and Song Lyric Discussion
- Topic: The Chain
- Replies: 3593
- Views: 350595
- Thu Apr 18, 2024 5:42 pm
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: Ray and Phil in Flight of the Dragonfly
- Replies: 8
- Views: 50
Re: Ray and Phil in Flight of the Dragonfly
Cheers Caleb.
- Thu Apr 18, 2024 5:37 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Fahrenheit, Not Celsius (version 5 -- new ending)
- Replies: 17
- Views: 279
Re: Fahrenheit, Not Celsius (version 5 -- new ending)
I was coming from a show. Happy, warm entertainers danced and sang, celebrating the wonder of being alive, of being young, of having a bed. It seemed that this lost soul was staging her own show. The window of the modern church was waist high, with a ledge for her to climb on, a place where every p...
- Wed Apr 17, 2024 11:22 am
- Forum: Music and Song Lyric Discussion
- Topic: The Chain
- Replies: 3593
- Views: 350595
- Wed Apr 17, 2024 10:39 am
- Forum: Music and Song Lyric Discussion
- Topic: The Chain
- Replies: 3593
- Views: 350595
- Tue Apr 16, 2024 11:48 am
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: A poem that I read today by Mac
- Replies: 338
- Views: 62112
Re: A poem that I read today by Mac
Yes, I remember that poignant poem John. Heaney was a thinking man, and also a thoughtful one because he felt his experience.
- Tue Apr 16, 2024 10:28 am
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: A poem that I read today by Mac
- Replies: 338
- Views: 62112
- Mon Apr 15, 2024 2:23 pm
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: Ray and Phil in Flight of the Dragonfly
- Replies: 8
- Views: 50
Re: Ray and Phil in Flight of the Dragonfly
Cheers John. My Shakespearian influence