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what lovely happy poem saw her dancing x

Loved your cute cheeky poem made me smile x

Maybe I'm missing something only younger people see? sort of liked your poem sad feel to it but haven't got a clue what your talking about, confused " nothing goes of only food and the light" in a fridge? That's all there is in a fridge !

I know not alot about what you write, but love the way you do it. Brought a story of intrigue and fairytale, pirates and fables. My comments are not of the experience of others but wanted to leave a message as I like what you write x

I loved your poem, made me laugh the very fist line had me in stitches hahahahaha. Sorry if it was meant to be a serious poem but it really tickled me like your style x

Well thank you for your very exciting comments. Just the sort of thing I wanted, the truth is a good thing especially for me. I love writing and really yearn to improve, if no one tells me whats wrong how can i ? So thank you very much, now you pointed out my mistakes I see them clearly, how strange...

Not sure i should be replying to your post? as looking at some of your replies i feel a bit " out of my depth "( keeping to a nautical theme there) also not sure if experienced poets want feed back from " beginners." But thought if i took the time to read your poem then I should ...

Ahhhhhhhhhh... Love your poem, very sad, brought back memories of my son when his heart was broken the fist time, I felt his pain yet could do nothing to help, just as you say in your words when he was little I could, " make it better. " With a tickle or a sweet or a kiss but how awful the...

Ummm don't know what I'm talking about, I love to write, love reading other peoples work , but wouldn't by any means of the imagination say I am an expert, but I didn't like the line in your poem "yellowing dry this, " just sounded wrong and my mind was re reading that line from then on .....

liked your thank you poem, gave me a lovely spring feeling x

Liked the flow of your poem i found it made me smile, right to the last line, when it took a sad turn with the lauguage. personal oppinion, was no need x

Big fat clouds barge overhead, full of storm, thick with dread, where boisterous wind's bend and clasp, shivering reeds and course marsh grass, over my shoulder lie rolling hills, imposing valley's crag's and fell's, just a whisper away from dusk, i arrived at Leighton Moss, alone grazing in soft ev...

Loved the line"she licks fake cream from her lips, " very nice line there could see her doing that as I read your poem. As I have only just joined this forum and I am by far not a expert on poetry, i cannot criticise yet, and will leave that to people who are far superior to me. All I can ...

awww loved the line " I slip into a dream one of only lovers inspiration," Really put me right in the picture, very nice feel to this poem liked the style of it and the title caught my eye very nice poem, I Am only a beginner and don't feel able to criticise your work maybe I will leave th...

Hiya, I am absolutely new to this sort of thing, have read the rules and will try to keep to them. Hope I am doing things right? Not sure if i am!! I have been writing poetry and short story's ...forever, but not really sharing them I don't confess to be a great writer, or a wonderful poet , but enj...