Poetry Forum

For me the poem is good because it told me about your day,
Those sleepy mornings’ innocent mornings, when we are lifeless,
And the placid rush hour had you tranquil
tool

One is left mute with the intenseness of the poem
Because its real, the joy in the poem is the passion in which
It is written, it is real, and heartfelt, you have gone to the inner
Most shrine of your being, good read, tool

lovely

one nit

julit( which) i would not have put in (which;)
Such is your buoyant sense of poetry upon a poetic breast;
they are very good, very good, to good,
you do stand out; tool

take care

a poem is born
bending over the sheep
in tranqual setting is shorn

pauline

have a look at ray millers lillism in (poetry for the over educated)

and have a look at the crits;

the man is very dry, THE MAN HAS INVISABLE HAVOC RINGS AROUND HIM;

PRICK THE THE BUM tool,

he is very good at what he says, use his crits as a life boat; tool

your poem was a gem

because it is real and i can see everything;

you are a rare poet of high quality,

don't panic chill when ray is being bloody obnixous

but what he sayes is well worth taking on board,

tool'

depressions are the sour cloth we rap ourselves in

the doom stick of hunger scratch your bone,

the extravagance of hunger, welds with the extravagance of wealth;

very nice read, tool

beetroot and delena

i thank you for your crit

you both got it right i was welcomeing beetroot to the pd,

delena and it was all done on the back of my donky called ego;

thank you both; tool

arian

thankyou for your crit

your looking glass over my work is very very instering;

i seem to have a certain fashion about me, archaic might be a lighter word;

thank you tool

lovely

i imagine you in a red room drinking poetry;

you have such a passion thank you

arunansu

you hit the nail on the head

she is a maiden blossm, and my dick went hunting her,

thanks mate

dante

thank you for your crit, yes i'am slighty archaic

i dated the most beautiful, her farther said the same thing;

but i'am trying to get all this together

thankyou

There are many ways in which a beetroot,
seek to gain communal recognition, prove themselves
attractive to the crowd,
by displaying sophisticated emotion;
do you think 2 opposites with different tactics,
in a jocular tone be comfortable advertencys;
the risk is failure in front of others,

mr tool

Under the feminine brightness of her moon she tongue beat me out of her life, and so her silence has me unable to pursue, I have become old in the mornings. high merit was never my practice, for i have not the art of a regular mind, tell her i still cannot vouch for the parliament with in my head, I...

as ray said a good write well crafted

tool

i've put it in the wrong one

tool

Most perfect in round, feminate brightness,
the moon, where foolish hopes are laid at its door step
and lovers sit, their pristine constitution two one another ,
becomes part of the bloody murders below,
all done with the clear faculty of reason,

tool

In chief excellence i was bound
in labours of love, unskilled
to bring that vast distance together,
for i could not even in curiosity
span loves vast river.
and my quill run low on ink.
when critique of the past is to ample.

tool

what your trying to say beet root

that the pope and god are secreted onto the surface of man from time to time

tool

they eats there hearts out
as i kiss my girl
under the lamp light blackout

Oh

tool

Still

tool

the dog said nothing
because his bone
was lying dead

hay thanks mac

i'am getting there airlings (children)

tool

thanks for that

arnuarnsu