haven't done all that many yet cause im at work
but will knuckle down to it later
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- Tue May 24, 2005 2:03 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: caught in blue light
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2308
- Tue May 24, 2005 1:33 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: caught in blue light
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2308
- Tue May 24, 2005 12:58 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: caught in blue light
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2308
caught in blue light
am not really sure about this one, doesn't quite sit right... Caught standing in blue light, Writing on blue paper with a blue pen I realized I’ve never marked a single sheet that I wrote. All the days I scribbled words in six foot letters On the inside of your eardrum Are lost and gone, leaving onl...
- Tue May 24, 2005 10:30 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: they fell in love inthe back seat of a taxi
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1816
- Tue May 24, 2005 7:55 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: here’s to the moon
- Replies: 16
- Views: 5139
- Tue May 24, 2005 7:49 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: A poem for a dead guy
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2731
i love the use of language the more formal 'petic' vocabulary like zenith and nadir, juxtapoesd with the title of the poem, and the final sentence really make it for me the simplest words sometimes express emotion more succinctly or are a release as opposed to more constructed sentences. do you know...
- Mon May 23, 2005 11:02 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Grid-Lock
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2991
i like it i think the mundane-ness of it is is strength a simple evryday occurence related in a tight way. Don't know if you meant to make haikus, don't personally feel that it matters if its off rythm, i think that plays to the pieces strength like the event described, just a bit off in terms of be...
- Mon May 23, 2005 10:53 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: they fell in love inthe back seat of a taxi
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1816
they fell in love inthe back seat of a taxi
just stumbled across this forum today and am quite excited about it all. Have never posted any work before so her goes: They fell in love in the back seat of a taxi, As it pulled up by the side of the river. When he had not been in the world for even a week, They dropped him on his head, And when he...
- Mon May 23, 2005 10:47 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Bird Song
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1790