Poetry Forum

Oooh this was mine! I still quite like this actually. The last line is meant to be a joke. I was getting fed up of writers trying to provoke with their tales of excess, and this culture that you need to be inebriated to prove you're having a good time. I guess it didn't really come across then!

Haha I don't remember that. Although I did share the log in with my boyfriend who can occasionally be a bit touchy.

Yep, I gave up on the poetry pretty swiftly. Not really my thing. Nice to see (read) you again!

I like it too, quite funny. It's a bit Grange Hill though, falls into a few cliches of teen/boy/school/tits etc etc. But then I guess that's what teen boys do! When is it set? It doesn't sound too modern if it is supposed to be present day, there aren't any knives, krus and no one is referred to as ...

Ha! I suppose there is. Will have a re-think. Growl was the first thing that popped into my head. I think it would work with no descriptive at all really, the words already indicate the tone. Thanks Ros, I have written some other patches but I'm still loosely forming the plot in my head. I do know t...

I used to post as Spencer_Broughton years ago but forgot my password! Nice to see you all again.

Hi guys. I used to post here ages ago under a different name but lost my log in. It you wouldn't mind having a look at this and letting me know what you think. I'm hoping it may be the beginning to a novel I have an idea for. But who knows. Probably needs some work. I'll do some reviews later on too...