Poetry Forum

no need to repeat the obvious, that this little poem is perfect at showing those snapshots (oops), so I'll just say that this actually brought me back to my own visit to Greece, I love the honesty too, even the distasteful and trite memories make me smile in nostalgia.
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Yeah pseudo, good work on this one, "the big G" bit had me laughing and getting queer looks from other people in the library, i'm currently petioning to have their sense of fun enlarged. But woe! I've been looking and looking and this is the most recent poem from pseud?! Where have you gon...

"Just promise me that one thing..." A request, no doubt, recounting past seasons of frivolity and merriment and eggnog turned sour. "Just promise me..." Not a desire this time for an immaterial gift that I never delivered in the past. He's not saying "... promise me that..&q...

i think it's the motherfucker
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about the poem: the content of the first half or so of the poem (up to "taken yesterday") speaks quite well to me, but i feel the line breaks make it sound awkward and stilted. it makes it read like a bunch of buzz words crushed together when instead I feel it is presenting a very nice im...

She said he was frail, but I begged for release, from dear abigail, to express respect for deceased uncles and cousins and twice removed parents; though knowing her answer as quite apparent. "One should strive for a kind of contrasting realities, to oppose and come back-" She was such a ba...

Flyers flutter unhinged from their perch they tell you not to be too clever for others own this place, leaving you in lurch if you think you came at the right time it's not the ivory tower you thought sky scraping minds have passed here sure but their looking down on you in the parking lot while pos...