' It is not to be seen beneath the appearances that tell of it '
What a great line.
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- Fri May 04, 2007 10:42 pm
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: A nice poem by Wallace Stevens
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2263
- Fri May 04, 2007 7:51 pm
- Forum: Any Other Business
- Topic: An apostrophe question
- Replies: 13
- Views: 4521
- Thu May 03, 2007 9:50 pm
- Forum: Any Other Business
- Topic: An apostrophe question
- Replies: 13
- Views: 4521
- Tue May 01, 2007 10:00 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: death of a tailor's cutter
- Replies: 11
- Views: 2945
Cheers Cameron. The dreaded apostophe! sorted. Am leaning toward agreement on last verse. Not entirely sure I want to get rid completely though. I do agree the 'stove yourself in' would probably stand better without repetion. Will consider an alternative verse or lines because I feel the whole thing...
- Mon Apr 30, 2007 9:12 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Japan!!
- Replies: 9
- Views: 1984
Not really my cup of tea this Bren but I could be reading it wrong. The structure/ rhyme scheme encouraged me to read it fast, almost in rap form. Which it probably shouldn't, and I am influenced. Perhaps by the picture. That being your cause, its not fast enough. Without beating about the bush, wit...
- Mon Apr 30, 2007 8:59 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Leitmotiven
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1659
Well, I've read this a few times. Partly because I like the language, in a physical sense, but mostly because I know there is a relevance to be found. Know because the poem says so. I'm thinking Nazi Germany but since Kims interpretation am looking for correlations between the two! uncomfortably, I ...
- Mon Apr 30, 2007 8:25 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: death of a tailor's cutter
- Replies: 11
- Views: 2945
death of a tailor's cutter
The eiderdown slips Your dressing-gown drips from the flesh of the sea. And a thousand silver scissors snip the flesh from out the sea. From the highway, a side road scoops out the hill, loops around the hill Drops down beneath a still brimming sea, a grey and brimming sea. Where you drove between h...
- Sat Apr 28, 2007 9:18 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Love's Loss is a Poem's Gain
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2034
Good stuff Arunansu. Very quaint and quite clever the way you've weaved a picture of yourself writing the poem whilst interpreting the 'action'. Really good. Also liked the tumbling use of language in this, which mirrors the tumbling out of love, specifically relevant to the way birds fall out. Only...
- Sun Apr 22, 2007 7:13 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Pictures When We Were Fashionable (Formerly Shellsuits)
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2513
After re-reading, the 'verdant' in skull reference (which I assumed was space helmet) and verdant being part of the reflection, refered more to the picture of Harrison Schmidt, where apparently hedges and greenery could be seen. aka: 'did we really land on the moon'? bollocks. Which doesn't matter a...
- Sun Apr 22, 2007 6:43 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Pictures When We Were Fashionable (Formerly Shellsuits)
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2513
- Sat Apr 21, 2007 12:49 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Kurukshetra
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2492
- Thu Apr 19, 2007 11:05 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Kurukshetra
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2492
- Thu Apr 19, 2007 8:37 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: The Solar System
- Replies: 16
- Views: 3400
Hiya Cam. Liked the characterization of the star and the planets. Also the haikus in stanzas which seemed to echo the isolation of each body. One or two sticking points which can perhaps be resolved by mixing/ matching the educational/ observational a little more evenly. Liked the Jupiter one a lot....
- Sun Apr 15, 2007 10:13 pm
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: phonetic reduction
- Replies: 15
- Views: 4275
- Mon Apr 09, 2007 9:24 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Colours Of Rainbow
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2043
As an afterthought: http://poetsgraves.co.uk/forum/viewtopic.php?t=4521 Look at comments, particularly Emily Dickinson comment. Intriguing considering the only correlation between the two poems is the theme. Also interesting you too, ended with death. Is this all sub-concious memory entanglement or ...
- Mon Apr 09, 2007 8:37 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Colours Of Rainbow
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2043
Only criticism: 'Pieces of purple has been lost into blues' Perhaps: Pieces of purple had/ or have been lost into blues. Or maybe (to mind better): A piece of purple has been lost into blues. Otherwise none, and I love the way you hold back on mentioning rainbow until end of first stanza, and the wa...
- Sun Apr 08, 2007 12:01 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: The Irish Cycle: 3: Maureen Rua
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1399
'Them lands beyond belong to strangers now' for me was a hook Bren, and set a look forward from the past scene onward. I enjoyed this poem regardless of its repetetive words and perhaps what could be seen as a sentimental sojourn in to the historic and uncelebrated beauty of strong women. I would've...
- Sat Apr 07, 2007 11:23 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: In the desert
- Replies: 11
- Views: 2944
- Sat Apr 07, 2007 10:54 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: One night to be confused
- Replies: 3
- Views: 938
One night to be confused
I am a disconnected plug, fumbled and stabbed into a blackened socket. A sprocket with broken teeth grinding a shifted gear downhill. Oh the thrill of a forked gesture to me as I pass and spill my guts. The V, to me, is some-kind of recognition for my moments of clarity. Sweet charity I cherish. Rel...
- Mon Apr 02, 2007 9:55 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: desolée
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1384
- Mon Apr 02, 2007 8:55 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: A mere half person I am not
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2411
Hello Gypsy Cake and welcome. On reading first stanza I groaned because I thought you were going all preachy and apart from that I absolutely disagreed with the sentiment. Then on reading second stanza I thought, oh, the poet recognizes the stigma! In contrast to the first. Good. Was completely paci...
- Thu Mar 29, 2007 9:01 pm
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: The Battle of Hastings - Marriot Edgar
- Replies: 3
- Views: 3115
The Runcorn Ferry by same. On the banks of the Mersey, o'er on Cheshire side, Lies Runcorn that's best known to fame By Transporter Bridge as takes folks over t'stream, Or else brings them back across same. In days afore Transporter Bridge were put up, A ferryboat lay in the slip, And old Ted the bo...
- Tue Mar 27, 2007 10:33 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: The Irish Cycle : 4: Joe McInerney
- Replies: 19
- Views: 3061
Aye, a good poem Brendan and flows as well as ever. Theme is secondary to your tale telling skill. A craft spun yarn. Not as up on history as your good self, always been more of a head down workin' man but enjoy a well told truth. Ireland is indeed a magical landscape, untouched surprisingly in its ...
- Sun Mar 18, 2007 5:04 pm
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: The great libraries
- Replies: 0
- Views: 1127
The great libraries
On radio 4 this week was at the South Bank Poetry Library.
An interesting listen and a great/ unusual rendition of D.T's 'Death Will Have No Dominion' about half way through.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/radio4/thegreatlib ... pip/05mja/
An interesting listen and a great/ unusual rendition of D.T's 'Death Will Have No Dominion' about half way through.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/radio4/thegreatlib ... pip/05mja/
- Sat Mar 17, 2007 11:14 pm
- Forum: Music and Song Lyric Discussion
- Topic: Poets’ Graves Blues Train
- Replies: 455
- Views: 205268