Poetry Forum

I just didn't want to upset anyone, I didn't know how it was in this community.
Clearly theres absolutely no issue, but thanks for the put down

I have a couple more angry ones, some more positive stuff too.
I'l get round to posting them in time.

Everyone has opinions, but it's not about an event or storytelling, it's about raw emotion and how what's occurred makes me feel, and caused me to write angry hate filled verse.

The meaning is so strong, this poem really got me inside your head, true poetry.
Not all men think like that though

About something pretty deep and real to me, I feel the swear words are necessary. Hurt me I've never loved anyone more, i've never loved anyone less, I've been force fed to the wolves, left a mangled marred mess. I hate you, I love you, I hate you, we fall, Fuck off from my dreams, I hate that I mis...

I like to read poems that are, or seem to be, an expressing of emotion, the baring of a soul.
Which is what I tend to write about, things literal to me, or a short time ago.

Thanks for the nice comments Nash, sorry I didnt review others poems first. I don't really think i'm good enough to judge other peoples work, though I do read it :D I revised that one: Strong Now On with the show, this face it wont crack, Life's a set of roads, there's forks and there's tracks. I gr...

On with the show, my feelings mellow out,
Life it ambles, in paths dark and unknown.
I greet challenges head on, theres no turning back,
Im back and im strong now, i'm on the attack!