I give up, which third wrote this?
Oh, the second third,
can I buy the first one dinner, we can discuss what to do with the bodies.
Why did you change to percent for the last third?
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- Tue Sep 06, 2005 11:22 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: apart.
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2010
- Tue Sep 06, 2005 11:07 pm
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: Dante
- Replies: 7
- Views: 5023
- Sun Sep 04, 2005 12:25 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: The lower pasture
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1685
- Sun Sep 04, 2005 12:18 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: The Non-Forest
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2001
the nightingale is a reference to keat's ode to a nightingale (just the fact that it exists, and that nightingales have been written about); and the whole stepping into a river thing may be chinese, but it also comes from Heraclitus of Ephesus. the idea behind this one was to describe an experience...
- Sat Sep 03, 2005 8:53 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: The Non-Forest
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2001
thanks rach: btw, this is deliberately chock full of allusions - my eternal respect to anyone who can spot them all! (i looked some up, i dont know them all by heart!) i think there are 8 poems/writers alluded to intentionally, though there might be more... My respect to you, for recycling the allu...
- Sat Sep 03, 2005 8:27 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Lock the Door
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1569
- Sun Aug 28, 2005 11:01 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Honky Tonk Tanka
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1481
- Sun Aug 28, 2005 10:55 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Obsessive Compulsive Disorder
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2050
- Sun Aug 28, 2005 10:50 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Fucking prolific
- Replies: 7
- Views: 1888
- Sat Aug 27, 2005 11:06 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Battling annoyance
- Replies: 13
- Views: 3112
Thanks doods. And contrary to opinion (TG) I wasn't drunk when I wrote or posted it. Although I see why you might think so. Basically a poem about things that bug me: I'm an upstanding Middle Englander these days, fucking drab. This should have been introduced, and wove somehow in as a theme. Don't...
- Sat Aug 27, 2005 10:54 am
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: About Poems - Quote by Auden.
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2431
- Thu Aug 25, 2005 10:32 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Anyone for Tanka?
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1228
See you've been rummaging in the archives arco. The three main ones (as far as I'm aware) are Haiku, Tanka and Choka (naga-uta). They all use the old 5, 7 routine. You'll be glad to know that meter is not involved and the syllable count is all syllables, stressed and unstressed. I don't think there...
- Thu Aug 25, 2005 10:24 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Old issues (Tanka)
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1669
- Thu Aug 25, 2005 10:10 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Battling annoyance
- Replies: 13
- Views: 3112
I like this stanza structure, with the one line aside. (or the short line) It is a structure from comedy, but you are setting it up like: Joke - punch line, there is no unifying theme here. As, is it comes off as incoherent. I stared my cat out, into the cold; He almost froze, won’t look me in the E...
- Sun Aug 21, 2005 6:42 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: The Golden Ratio
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1371
- Sun Aug 21, 2005 6:40 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: The Golden Ratio
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1371
- Sun Aug 21, 2005 6:24 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: How odd I see
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1294
- Sun Aug 21, 2005 3:16 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: The Golden Ratio
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1371
- Sun Aug 21, 2005 2:47 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: From the window
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1137
- Sun Aug 21, 2005 2:26 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Concrete poetry
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1374
- Sun Aug 21, 2005 2:19 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: How odd I see
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1294
- Sun Aug 21, 2005 1:00 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: How odd I see
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1294
How odd I see
tell me
tell me
what do you see
when you look upon the water
do you see your own reflection
kneeling on the surface
fish beneath
do you see the sky through
leaves
I fear I see the wind instead
hidden behind a breeze
*two line changes
tell me
what do you see
when you look upon the water
do you see your own reflection
kneeling on the surface
fish beneath
do you see the sky through
leaves
I fear I see the wind instead
hidden behind a breeze
*two line changes
- Sat Aug 20, 2005 8:56 pm
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: Influences
- Replies: 18
- Views: 7281
- Sat Aug 20, 2005 2:18 pm
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: Influences
- Replies: 18
- Views: 7281
- Sat Aug 20, 2005 2:12 pm
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: Influences
- Replies: 18
- Views: 7281
T.S. Eliot (too much so) Ezra Pound (more for his writing on, than his poetry) Baltimore (the city, for one dead, the other living) Jacques Derrida (who served as a starting point for my lunacy) Dan Schneider (an excellent web site, that I read every day) of course Keats and Yeats and Coleridge some...