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- Tue Nov 30, 2010 8:36 pm
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: Poetry is Form - Discuss?
- Replies: 20
- Views: 4630
Re: Poetry is Form - Discuss?
I'm divided so I'll quote Robert Frost: "Free verse is like playing tennis without a net." and Ezra Pound: "Breaking the pentameter, that is the first step." Robert's right, Ezra's wrong. Making the pentameter is the first step: you have to make it before you can break it. And w...
- Wed Sep 26, 2007 2:47 am
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: Simple question?
- Replies: 10
- Views: 3514
Re: Simple question?
Friedrich Hölderlin
T.S. Eliot mostly pre-1925
Ol' Ezra: amazed at both his talent and what a moron he was, unless he wrote some of that stuff to help with his insanity defense.
Dante
and I keep coming across translations by W.S. Merwin that I like.
T.S. Eliot mostly pre-1925
Ol' Ezra: amazed at both his talent and what a moron he was, unless he wrote some of that stuff to help with his insanity defense.
Dante
and I keep coming across translations by W.S. Merwin that I like.
- Wed Sep 26, 2007 1:59 am
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: Eliot reads Prufrock
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2245
Re: Eliot reads Prufrock
Ah, but he was an American (and irreverent) when he wrote it. He was British (and reverent) when he recorded it. I couldn't listen to it. Destroyed.
I expect to hear that voice in "Four quartets".
I expect to hear that voice in "Four quartets".
- Wed Sep 26, 2007 1:27 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Repose
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2907
Re: Repose
I didn't say it did nothing :o) Spending more time with it I am getting an increasingly vertiginous sense of falling from the positive (if slightly foreboding) first stanza to the bleakness of the second. The coming/going of the stars is simple, insidious and rhythmic - I find it increases the horr...
- Wed Sep 26, 2007 1:18 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Repose
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2907
Re: Repose
1.) back yes, a little, thank you. 2.) Globus and Dave, thank you for the comments and accept my humble apology for the delay A few words regarding. I had a few lines (the top) sitting around for over a year with nowhere to go. I changed the title to Repose and it was in the back of my head when I w...
- Sun Aug 19, 2007 12:52 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Walking with Ambulances
- Replies: 18
- Views: 2928
Re: Walking with Ambulances
Oysters - we have these pre-pay travel passes for buses and tube trains. As you get on the bus there is a machine: ............you hold the card up to it and it beeps to show you it has deducted the fare. I'm glad you cleared that one up for me, I was wonderin' why the cap. It sounded great, halfwa...
- Sun Aug 19, 2007 12:35 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Repose
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2907
Re: Repose
Hi I've only had a quick read, so forgive any foolishness on my part. I think that if you are intending reference to the treatment of syphillis with mercury, you should develop that more explicitly. It's an orrible thing and one surely full of wordplay? Does it offer an angle on the characters rela...
- Sat Aug 18, 2007 11:45 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: synergy
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1457
Re: synergy
Agree with Lubesh on "swollen and pregnant" 2 observations: Spin like a planet and stamp like a bull. Try inverting so "planet" is at the end of the line, I think it would give a near rhyme to naked. "And feel logic in the raindrop" sounds awful god damn poetic, that ma...
- Sat Aug 18, 2007 11:29 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Repose
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2907
Re: Repose
Thank you, barrie, Poe? Re-poe-s? Love Poe. Thank you, Lubesh. The lines, hoped it would be a total break between the nice and rosey, a wishful state of bliss (I copped a bit of cliche with the "black waves" could also be a metaphor for depression)and say gruesome reality. A horror. savour...
- Sat Aug 18, 2007 3:24 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Repose
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2907
Repose
In spent fields the ravens glean; we walk and the black waves pull apart. "The sunset is coming soon, what I had I gave to you" I softly laugh. "And when the stars come out?" she laughs, softer still. _______________________________________________________________________________...
- Sat Aug 18, 2007 2:22 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Deadlands
- Replies: 21
- Views: 4711
Re: Deadlands
a comment on a comment, I agree with this statement "The first part of it is like living in a junk store of old and outdated clichés; it is a nightmare. The thing that is missing is life." , but by the nature of it's title, it should be "missing in life", and judging by the comme...
- Mon Sep 26, 2005 11:34 pm
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: Rhyme and Meter
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1950
- Wed Sep 14, 2005 8:56 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Childhood Liturgy
- Replies: 11
- Views: 2638
- Wed Sep 14, 2005 8:52 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Blank verse poem.
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2559
- Wed Sep 14, 2005 8:35 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Driving out the muse
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1617
- Wed Sep 14, 2005 8:32 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Childhood Liturgy
- Replies: 11
- Views: 2638
- Wed Sep 14, 2005 8:23 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: MARKER
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2071
- Sun Sep 11, 2005 5:09 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: MARKER
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2071
- Sat Sep 10, 2005 4:26 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: MARKER
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2071
- Sat Sep 10, 2005 3:29 pm
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: Favourite Poem
- Replies: 15
- Views: 7721
- Sat Sep 10, 2005 3:20 pm
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: Cynghanedd
- Replies: 0
- Views: 1405
Cynghanedd
Anybody know of any examples of this written in English? I found one. Looking for more.
- Sat Sep 10, 2005 3:09 pm
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: Dante
- Replies: 7
- Views: 5016
- Sat Sep 10, 2005 2:59 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Bethlehem
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1488
- Sat Sep 10, 2005 2:54 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Tidbits
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1555
- Wed Sep 07, 2005 8:47 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Tidbits
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1555