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dusk deepens
and fog descends
trumpets sound

rotund tomato shaped
head of a man
bobs on the water

Your sacrifice waits
robed in white
kneeling before you

In keeping with your advise on good bad good sandwich... you definetly have me hooked, i want to know more. I find the character to be a lonely one. He puts what he does under his bed and waits until the dark days of winter to look at them, maybe reminding himself of happy times. to not show what he...

thank you for that, i shall endevour to get my feet wet.
regards

between the twin thorns
of rome and athens
castor and pollux arise

thank you for the comments. . i will go and look

from a beginners perspective, hello. I am not going to comment on the technical aspects i will leave that to others more qualified. but just to say i really liked this poem, i got the mood i thought on first reading it was about loss and to be honest im not concerned with how archaic it is. why does...

hello i have just signed up having "lurked" for some time I wanted to improve my understanding and writing of poetry and you seem like a friendly bunch. i have read the rules and will have a look around this expanse of imagination for something to comment on. (Although i am a complete begi...