Poetry Forum

If you didn't smoke, drink and only eat lentils and veg you'd be a bit miserable too mate.I know I would.

Have you tried Haliborange?
Not a great way to commit suicide but they may just brighten up an otherwise dull day.

Sticks and stones may break your bones but baseball bats work better Michael Fish needs a satellite dish When trying to predict the weather The owl and the pussy cat went to see They'd been press ganged into the Navy OXO scores very low on a Scrabble board But makes exceedingly tasty gravy Richard M...

That flows just nice does that..(weird lancashire twang going on)..Can't see much relevance to anything though.Not that the poem suffers for this.It is an interesting (as you said) little piece.Has me wondering if you are as well?

I liked it too.Not just sentiment but execution too.For some reason the tramp voice sounded dead plummy in my head.Sort of upper class hobo begging for Earl Grey money! Sorry.

Its a good exercise and makes for an okay read too but didn't you leave one F word out?

In the Supermarket of Devotion I'm way down your shopping list In the aisles of emotion Kisses and cuddles are being missed In the cold freezer section I'm frozen in time There's a store detective on my tail My affection deemed a crime Perhaps I'll revamp my display Maybe halve my cost Anything to g...

Past the point of No Return Past the point where the slow burn of love Will no longer heal the wounds That I no longer feel anyway All that remains A constant ache like a blunted amputation The anticipation of separation More acutely felt than the passing of relations Dawning realisation that everyt...

Spoon feed a hobbit?..
Kinky.

:twisted: :evil: :twisted: Styleless kids are wack Get mashed up in the riot Stepping to me is like smoking crack - You shouldn't try it - So back to the drawing board and Change a word or three Getting all up on this site like you're thinking you could murder me? The absurdity Asbo 1 wears the pant...

Bloody ell.Wow, that was some reply Leslie, thanks very much for taking the time...I agree with some of your comments.Gangster slang..I guess it does read a tad horrible doesn't it but as I said on earlier occasions I write how I talk - colloquially and with bad grammar! Forgive me, its just the way...

Piper at the Gates of Dawn is the only relevant Floyd album peeps.

Anything with a title like that can hardly be described as slick Spike.

Fires, Tsunamis and Quakes Swollen lakes breaking the gates Now they got corpses, alligators and snakes Lord how much more can poor folk take? Emergency State State of Emergency Urgency And I don't mean to alarm or scare but wasn't this all written somewhere? Rivers of death Streets of despair Need ...

I really like the imagery in this Spike.The line 'Spitting venom in every verse..' Wicked.You're a man after me own heart...I started seeing advancing hoards with Shaolin swords coming down my garden path after reading this!

It's good that is.Put me in mind of a Nirvana song..can't think which one now.Not too sure about the chorusy stanza though..'narcotic chords and all that..' Seems a bit sixth form to me...If you were blasted on Absinthe when you wrote this shouldn't it have had a few more Godly references and suchli...

The media has got a lot to answer for.
Smart poem.
Wonder if you just jealous of thin lassies though??...Only kidding, don't come round my house and eat me will you.

heheh.Don't feck about with bluebeards bird.

In Viz many moons ago there was a one frame cartoon of a bloke and his wife sat before a doctors consultation table.The old blokes pants are round his ankles.The caption reads - "Doctor, my husband has just had a stroke!"...It made me laugh.
Expressive poem by the way.

Baby Nina born at 1027 pm saturday night.Healthy n beautiful. me happy!

I don't understand Jerusalem reference.Are you saying you think I'm Jewish or Catholic?...THanks for comments though bruv.

Piss poor student wank.

I remember you well in Chelsea Hotel,
You were talking so brave and so sweet
Giving me head on the unmade bed
While the limousines wait in the street.

Genius.Leornard Cohen is hilarious.

"...In debt I owe someone a fiver, Maybe I should try my hand at drag. James Dean was just a careless driver, and Marilyn Monroe was just a slag..." "...I was just sitting there eating a salmonella sandwich when a man walked up to me, 'Would you mind dear boy if I asked you a question...

We are living through dark days This Job Seeker's Agrievement has got us strangled and caged Tied our hands behind our backs so we're blinded and chained And its making me crazed cos with the pittance they pay You cannot walk with confidence or see your way throught the haze I want to sail the calm ...