Poetry Forum

DA & Arian. Thanx for the feedback. I rarely - if ever use punctuation in a poem. I use dashes & spaces. As I always say.. Grammar & punctuation are for the insecure !! Grin. I conceded & added the question mark at the end. I like the lack of punctuation for the run on sentences I us...

DA. I wanted this to be fragmented & unfinished. The idea I tried to convey is a person - insomniac- searching for peace & poetry in that steely grey hour that most should be awake. I use to write long poems & now
I try to make them short & bitter.

Brian. Thanx for the warm welcome. If you can post a note here I will be glad to delete my entire profile if this is the response one rec's. Is this my best or worst - NO. But I selected this one due to the name of this forum. It was written at a workshop while I did my daily walk to the cemetery be...

Mulberry. You have some GREAT lines in the first half of this creation - I see you suffer from meandering fever that I once had. Get in & get out - Tell the story is what they say. But sometimes it feels great to wander with wordings & create an epic adventure !! As with a good sauce - tryin...

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I had to read this numerous times to understand & feel it - which is what a poem should do. Yet I feel the flow is turbulent as the monsoon in process. May I suggest ... Make the last stanza the FIRST stanza & line break after "mustard" Then in the last stanza drop the first two wo...

Vey nice indeed. I am not a bad photog guy & this is awesome. Looks like an engraving to me

So Delph-ambi... Are we like the zoombies
taking over the cyber - site. The Night of The Living Living ?
Auwaaaaahhhh

Thanx fo the hello Delph-amb. And a big Howdy back to you David

Hello Delph-ambi

I just joined after you - Look forward to chatting & sharing poetry

Hello Denis Joe - I just joined yesterday - I like Euro writers better than American - I (try to ) write poetry in Italian also.
I just read about the magazine The Rialto yesterday . I belong to another UK based forum but it is overran with Americans! LOL

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Sharra - I actually like the first version better myself - it is as if I am beside you & with you in the first - In your edited version if is as if you forgot to tell me half the story or polished the truth too much. Perhaps put TRACEY in all caps - as in a nbame tag? I was Tescos - in a small t...

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