Bombadil,
I've been at a computer most of today programming and I know that a computer can certainly make me feel angst and discontent. Maybe they do understand...
...OK I think i've been in front of this screen for too long.
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- Thu Nov 03, 2005 6:01 pm
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: Art v. Science
- Replies: 21
- Views: 10285
- Thu Nov 03, 2005 5:58 pm
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: Art v. Science
- Replies: 21
- Views: 10285
Good point. There is something about chess that brings the two a little closer together. This has reminded my of a poem I read a while back. I can't remember the name but it's about the way science and poetry are viewed by the world. I think it might've been translated from Russian? Anyway the first...
- Thu Nov 03, 2005 5:42 pm
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: Art v. Science
- Replies: 21
- Views: 10285
- Thu Nov 03, 2005 5:18 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: .
- Replies: 23
- Views: 5256
- Thu Nov 03, 2005 5:01 pm
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: Forum Ideas?
- Replies: 15
- Views: 8179
- Thu Nov 03, 2005 12:23 pm
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: Forum Ideas?
- Replies: 15
- Views: 8179
Forum Ideas?
Hello Everyone, First of all I'm sorry if this has been discussed before and decided against, but I was wondering if anyone had ever considered the possibility of having a challenge/competition once a month with a suggested theme or form for a poem. I just thought it would be interesting to see the ...
- Mon Oct 31, 2005 12:24 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: En route to the taxidermist
- Replies: 17
- Views: 5234
- Mon Oct 31, 2005 12:07 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Poem
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2722
- Mon Oct 31, 2005 11:55 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Poem
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2722
- Mon Oct 31, 2005 11:30 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Poem
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2722
- Mon Oct 31, 2005 10:36 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Through Pollock's Autumn Rhythm
- Replies: 13
- Views: 3632
- Fri Oct 28, 2005 2:08 pm
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: Favourite Poem
- Replies: 15
- Views: 7726
- Fri Oct 28, 2005 11:19 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: My poetry.
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2785
I aggree with alex. Try a new username and maybe post something new that you've written, not something from your blog (although I've not seen it; there might be some good stuff on there). If you put your blog in your profile as your website it's a good way for people to decide whether they want to r...
- Thu Oct 27, 2005 1:25 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Poem for a pen.
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1142
- Wed Oct 26, 2005 3:21 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Poem for a pen.
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1142
- Wed Oct 26, 2005 9:24 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Poem for a pen.
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1142
Poem for a pen.
An inky vortex of emotions,
hidden words,
packed tight.
Turning feelings into shapes:
Circles and lines,
Crosses and dots.
Your motions are memories,
ups and downs,
underlinings.
Movements moving people,
pushing away
and calling home.
But drained by passing time and paper,
You fade and fail.
hidden words,
packed tight.
Turning feelings into shapes:
Circles and lines,
Crosses and dots.
Your motions are memories,
ups and downs,
underlinings.
Movements moving people,
pushing away
and calling home.
But drained by passing time and paper,
You fade and fail.
- Fri Oct 21, 2005 12:19 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: A Once Warm, Cold Shoulder
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2789
- Fri Oct 21, 2005 12:17 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: What we did before dark.
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3657
I'm very cautious of posting on the boards without constructive critism now. But in the case of this peice there's nothing that I can see that could be changed. I was pretty sure that: I voiced no jealousy; though the chalk of their bodies were closer than ours were. would be the be the best thing I...
- Thu Oct 20, 2005 2:27 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: A Once Warm, Cold Shoulder
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2789
I've tried a couple of things to replace the final stanza of this peom. Could you give me you're opinions on this as a slightly more humourous ending? Again be brutal. I'd expect no less from you all. There was a time when we used to lie together, and in a funny way I suppose we still do that. But t...
- Wed Oct 19, 2005 5:56 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: A Once Warm, Cold Shoulder
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2789
Thanks alot for the advice everyone. kj: do you think the last stanza should be dropped altogther? On reflextion it's a little forced to justifiy the the single pun. Thought the suggestions you made make alot of sense. I might try and rewrite it tonight if the insomnia hits again. rachel: I think yo...
- Wed Oct 19, 2005 4:19 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: A Once Warm, Cold Shoulder
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2789
- Wed Oct 19, 2005 4:12 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: A Once Warm, Cold Shoulder
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2789
A Once Warm, Cold Shoulder
There was a time when you would move under my fingers, but now that’s once a month? and often less. And although the memory of you naked lingers, now, you turn your back while you undress. There was a time, somewhere back around the start, our bed was breathless, and not just filled with sighs, when...
- Thu Oct 13, 2005 1:22 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Stranded
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1262
Hey Camus Great imagery. I’m impressed with the many beautiful ways you’ve found to describe something that most people would only see as being sad or repulsive a monument with the saddest eyes and gorged old corset bones protruding through resisting hide are truly great lines that I’m sure I’ll rem...
- Wed Sep 21, 2005 4:02 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Signal Hill, St John's, NF
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1964
Hey kj, I really liked this poem. Especially the last 2 lines; masses of gulls indicating the molten streak of the effluent pipe). What a great image. Maybe it's just me but I didn't get the metaphor of the effluent stream symbolising crappy communications clogging the channels that Arcadian picked ...
- Tue Sep 20, 2005 11:45 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Trapped in a musical
- Replies: 2
- Views: 940
Trapped in a musical
I feel like I’m trapped in a musical, but it’s one that I’m sure I’ve not seen. The cast's faces all look quite familiar, and the locations: all places I’ve been. But I can’t seem to think what the words are. As for dance steps I haven’t a clue. Please somebody show me the way to the wings as I’m su...