Poetry Forum

See me See me, not this carcass in a chair this body that dribbles and twitches an old man past his best, a blank stare if I could grab this fog I would lift it Hear the voice of better years that have passed not the nonsense that now slips off my tongue and if I repeat questions I've asked please ...

I enjoyed this poem. Quite sinister but still retains a light-hearted feel, thanks.

I really enjoyed reading this, cheers.

i'm in love with a girl the butterfly to my knife the spark in my heart the rock of crack to my pipe she's the marrow to my bones the mobile to my home the jesus to my christ the pedal to my bike i'm in love with a girl she's the hemp to my weed that feeling in my guts she's the boat to my sea the h...

Thankyou both for your views. "of his eyes" is a typo, should be "off' I like monotonous and feel I will stick with it. However reading over it again your point on the "bag of snot" part I take on board. When I read the poem out myself it seems to work, but looking at it fro...

This is one of the first poems I have written and the first one anybody will have read. Please let me know of any thoughts, thankyou! ---------------------------------------- He jumps back in his meat cage Awakes for the sunrise Muscles twitch and tendons Pull Sunlight reflects of his eyes Every day...

Hello, My name is Alex as you may have guessed, I'm 22 from London and have only just recently started writing. I have come one here to share what I have been doing and hopefully improve. I have never had anybody read anything of mine so am a little nervous, but appreciate and welcome any constructi...