Poetry Forum

This was written at a time when i was completely outraged at the way the world is turning out, and even my sweet MJ couldn't really take my mind off of things. (Not as if it's any better now.) Again, as with the prequel, it leaves alot to be desired. It needs some work, and where else is a better pa...

Thankyou for your replies. You're opinions and suggestions have been taken into account with great appreciation.

I'll get round to posting more of my poems.

Thanks alot for your reply. I too think that the second stanza is left with alot of room for improvement, though it is quite often that i lose inspiration during the writing of my pieces.

I'm new to this site, and poetry forums in general, so i'm not really sure of the reactions i will recieve for my efforts. Though please do be truthful, as even bad criticism can be used for good. Lascivia You know the place in the back of your mind? You should take a trip to mine. Chrysanthemums of...

Hello,

My name is Andrew (or Roo, as my friends call me) and I am very interested in poetry.
I like to write about politics, philosophy, love, and all major emotional issues.

I'm looking forward to posting on these forums, and meeting new people who share my passion.

Thanks.