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This poem is really touching, excellently written in my opinion, it flows very easily and is so full of emotion, hope and positivity. The fact you that the child is still in-utero seems to add a feeling of tenderness and anticipation of what is to come between the father and the child. I especially ...

He he he! Anything that mocks Phil Collins is good in my book! Very amusing.

I really like this, I'm just new to the site and have not read much, however this poem strikes a chord. I like the use of vivid imagery with an essentially bleak undertone. The content is depressing but true and the first stanza I particularly like - it's food for thought. Thanks for sharing it!
Dan

Hello people. I thought it would be a good idea to introduce myself. I'm new to all this on-line forum business, however I've been meaning to join a poetry forum for a while and as this is the first one i came accross, it seemed a logical step to join this one. I enjoy discussion regarding poetry an...