Poetry Forum

I have to agree with kj, that truly is an amazing poem.
It reads so well that the length isn't a problem.
excellent.

What a lovely poem. I'm a mother myself, to two girls. It's nice and different to hear a fathers thoughts of anticipation and dreams throughout the pregnancy. It really is the best thing in the world, the poem could keep going forever. Each day they bring something new into our lives. I hope all you...

Beautifully said. Good consructive criticism.

I agree with ASBO1, I'm shocked to see derek simply being pulled apart and really think that a bit of encouragement wouldn't go a miss. To me it seems like they are a small clique who build themselves up by putting others down. I'd like to tell derek that there are other poetry forums who are willin...

I liked the poem and dereks way of writing because to me it is different, the sentences aren't as you'd always expect. You are very mistaken, Bombadil, to think that only your opinion counts. I liked it and to me that's what is important.

Hello derek,
I don't write much poetry but do enjoy reading poems. It's really nice to see someone write in their own style instead of trying to be like everyone else. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem and look forward to finding more.