Poetry Forum

Loved it, now i remember why i dont come here much,
everyone is so great at poetry
well doen though.

A Sombre Interlude So inexperienced but still original, Sweet to the taste, but amazing touch, Drawn to the fire, and welcomed, So beautifully crafted, who can hold this prize, Everything has a darker turn, the urge to kill, The taste of blood, makes her feel the rush, Even if cast away, she still c...

Now that i have finialised it- The trees that once were great, Are now even greater while white, The snow has mounted the grass, Frozen are the hearts who wonder, I saw the rain wash away the beautiful mask, I mourned the days the sun came out, My is forever sealed on your palm, But now that time is...

Trying to think of a new stanza for this, or do i leave it alone? *hmmmmm*

i would, but ah! im all out. nice work though

Um.....wow *looks impressed*

Frozen Kiss The tress that once were great, Are now even greater while white, The snow has mounted the grass, Frozen are the hearts who wonder, I saw the rain wash away the beautiful mask, I mourned the days that the sun came out, My frozen kiss is forever on your hand, But now that time is over, i ...

My word hates me, and doesnt have spell checker

what?

I was close to breaking the key board.

Quell Your Ideas Thank you for the way you corroded my skin, The way your incinerated my flesh as i went inside, You left me for dead after you had your way, But daggers down tonight because you wont win, My viens ache from your essence, Yet my tounge still savours your flesh, You still remain obliv...

I loved this. not sure why, i dont kick water butts.

what you trying to say there?

i liked it

Im just, kinda fine printing it as such,

Im no win the proccess of re-writing the poem to make it better.

I wonder, do you think the title suits the poem ok?

the title, is not that, that was just the subject as it was 2;30 am and i didnt know what to put

ok, thanks for that i have corrected it now.

i think my poem entitled. "ok i really tried on this one" was rather slick

thank you

thank you.

I even gave backgroubnd info

Well, i mainly tried to focus on spelling this time anyway

Breath In Cold Wind This is a broken heart, Well what’s left of it anyway, Floating dreams, placed on paper, ready to give away, Crumpled up, broken, shattered, then fixed, Can you fix my dreams, Can you fix my heart, It seems like you mean something to me, something different, Something untamed and...