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Yes i agree with Barrie, Although it is very emotive i'd like to be able to picture it.
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- Tue Apr 25, 2006 10:56 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Lost
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2734
- Tue Apr 25, 2006 10:49 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Bath Time
- Replies: 6
- Views: 3993
Bath Time
Rain like drops tickle taps Plugged Flame blessed waters rise A lonely hair sails the high tide Waters purest innocence Taken by a plunging fizz Erotic motions rippling Niagra plungepool, bubbling Thrown by a river tribe A sliding body Causes rising jungle waters A brimming mixture Only the head afl...
- Wed Apr 05, 2006 10:58 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Winter stroll
- Replies: 3
- Views: 3029
- Wed Apr 05, 2006 6:12 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Winter stroll
- Replies: 3
- Views: 3029
Winter stroll
Invisible fan always breathing
usually caressing faces tenderly
with softly humming ghostly moans
I stepped upon
with wrapped clothes
a dribbled-upon grass
glowing with appetising dew
mirror vision
in ice cube puddles
dog leaded behind
tredding
imprinted stepping stones
on a newborn land
usually caressing faces tenderly
with softly humming ghostly moans
I stepped upon
with wrapped clothes
a dribbled-upon grass
glowing with appetising dew
mirror vision
in ice cube puddles
dog leaded behind
tredding
imprinted stepping stones
on a newborn land
- Wed Apr 05, 2006 6:04 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Hush
- Replies: 9
- Views: 4936
- Wed Apr 05, 2006 6:00 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Railroad Crossing
- Replies: 11
- Views: 3380
- Tue Apr 04, 2006 7:04 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Finding
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1603
- Mon Apr 03, 2006 9:26 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Sleeping Adventures
- Replies: 1
- Views: 901
- Mon Apr 03, 2006 7:44 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: We are everything
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1497
- Mon Apr 03, 2006 7:40 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Deserved
- Replies: 6
- Views: 3358
- Mon Apr 03, 2006 7:36 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Finding
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1603
- Mon Apr 03, 2006 7:27 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Finally useful
- Replies: 11
- Views: 3310
- Mon Apr 03, 2006 7:20 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Want Out
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1079
- Mon Apr 03, 2006 7:16 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: State of Being
- Replies: 6
- Views: 4073
- Mon Apr 03, 2006 12:11 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Finding
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1603
Finding
A penny drops her lifetime spent technology, a burden Envy of the forest tribes happy lives where water is smelt and seen The gold, silver, red compass reads Fear and loathing north, south, west and east Travelled the seven seas To escape the humanley greed Saw a creature free, in the dark of the br...
- Mon Apr 03, 2006 12:08 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Just a ditty...
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2293
- Mon Apr 03, 2006 12:03 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Your Crime
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1956
I like the idea. I didn't quite get the point in parts though. Perhaps it's just me. My heated heart leaps to my coat. I wait in the moonlight for your secret car so that we may watch as one, heart to heart, in search of the magnificient red and mystical prison of love. I think you could miss out a ...
- Sun Apr 02, 2006 11:55 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Sleeping Adventures
- Replies: 1
- Views: 901
Sleeping Adventures
Some people were Blood spilled On trodden grass Piercing metal by their side Me and people, inside stories matched, misplaced a ringing, unheard Sirens arrive Question time Trodden grass, again examined minds walls of echoed anticipation frenzy locked up? fear a glimpse of seeing sunfilled joy - the...
- Mon Oct 31, 2005 1:23 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: No need for time
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1768
hi
Thanks for the comment Sean I think the ending is the best part for me personally. I like the idea behind the rest, but i don't think it's as poetic.
- Mon Oct 31, 2005 1:09 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: No need for time
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1768
No need for time
Once upon a time Is always, everywhere, everytime No different Not significant A believed movement Second by second Tick-tock Getting somewhere Tick-tock Still going Tick-tock Not where yet? Time is still, motionless An imaginery yet believed importance Living by the grandfather clock Grandfathers d...
- Sat Oct 29, 2005 2:42 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: She used to weep
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1414
- Fri Oct 28, 2005 10:59 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: She used to weep
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1414
She used to weep
A field brimming with roses Tenderly blown, a soft breeze " A rose for every heart " a widow whispered Petals perturbed and blown Long ago she was shown Such a heinous vision Embedded in her eyelashes A flickering pain A death in vain, sharing her name For years and years Her house teems w...
- Fri Oct 28, 2005 10:52 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Wrong or right is wrong
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1420
- Fri Oct 28, 2005 9:26 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Wrong or right is wrong
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1420
- Fri Oct 28, 2005 5:39 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Point of No Return
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1062