Poetry Forum

Nice photos! what kind of camera did you use?

I've loved Larkin's poems since I studied him in school. I,too, was unaware that he had written novels as well. I'm definitely going to get one and curl up with a cup of tea. Might start with Jill since you seemed to like it!

Well done, it looks great!

I agree with Richard, who cares about syntax, this poem is gritty and emotive and there is a poignancy to it. well done!

It's really useful to have some advice about these publications, I'd just been trying to google this stuff myself and have been getting nowhere! Going to stay with a friend for the weekend so will get down to it when I get back! thanks for all the help!

That's great! congratulations, you deserve it it's a good portrait!

I've been reading Edgar Allan Poe, a collection of poems and short stories. I love it!

gavin wrote:Pearly half-toned feeling
her food the colour of light.
With-in the clever mechanism of imitation

This is my favourite part! Very nice.

Great idea. Very slick as well!

Hi Vincent,

I'm new here as well! I've just started writing again and am experimenting at the moment!

Nice to meet you all and I look forward to chatting with you soon!