Poetry Forum

It's been a while since I last posted anything and kind of got out of the swing of things but here is my latest attempt I can't forget your face Even though I let you go Surrounded by the image of your voice I pray that death comes swiftly. But you pray for there to be no god So my prayers are unans...

Thank you for reading this poem To clarify the gallows are a set of swings that the poet stares at while thinking about his / her life and if it is something they want to continue with (IE suicide) the song that the gallows sing is definitely sung in the poets but refers to the thoughts of suicide. ...

Really like the bully being his own victim, really good

Another old poem that i have updated I'm burning down these bridges severing the ties past the point of no return is this my future or my demise some may say I'm running running from my fears but what they don't realize my life has no worth here a heart split in pieces between friends that i hold de...

A poem i wrote a while back that i found and updated, let me know what you think

The gallows in my garden
stare at me all day
they sing a song that makes me think
is this my last day
tomorrow is not here yet
but the voices have not gone
do i do what they tell me
and sing their last song

Thank you for the advice, much appreciated. I will give the second verse a look over once work eases up a little.
Sadly for the punctuation i am dyslexic but will give it a go, only one way to learn i suppose


Again Thank You
Tom

I really like the line

Tried hide and seek with angels
who laughed at men and mice.

though the two lines after that makes it fell a little clucky

Procrastination for the nation this box of pictures hold us down a zombie nation we created staring blindly at the box we do not work we do not play our vision stolen minds fade away But this does not matter no this poem can not teach you will still go home tonight and say "Put the Tele on"...

i love how honest this poem is, made me giggle.
"spitting venom with a sick; " makes me think that you blew your load to early, but i have a weird mind and know that's not what you meant

Got bored today so thought i would have a go at writing a poem This mirror does not reflect me this mirror does not show my heart this mirror does not show the blackness this mirror only shows love This mirror shows no fractures this mirror is just a lie this mirror shows no heartache this mirror sh...

Really good peom, i agree with ray i am still sitting here asking my else what is he been missing for 18months. BRILLIANT

Hey
I love a good poem that's slightly quirky, good work really enjoyed the read

Tom

I am not
but yet I am
a plain and simple humble man
No instructions included
no batteries required
just add a kiss
and the cogs will twist

As you have my heart
you are my soul
without that kiss
without that smile
I am just a plain and simple child

Right i think i have changed the spelling / grammer correctly, i think with time once i have written a few of these i will get the hang of it.


THANK YOU all soooo much for your help and feedback much appricated.

Cheers
Tom

Thank you for the feed back means a lot. Tumor killed me very funny now i have it in my head haha
Sadly on the spelling and puncuation side of things i am a bit Dyslex (i dont even know is thats spelt right ) but will see if i can pick out any thing obvious.

I heard a rumor, about my humor; Some say its quite extreme. And yes i do laugh, and no i don't dance; At things that make some squirm. But what they don't see, is what i truly believe; To laugh or cry are our option's. So while you cry, sob and moan; Watch me laugh hysterically. And then just think...