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by Sybil
Wed Feb 08, 2012 8:09 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: Crows
Replies: 7
Views: 2083

Re: Crows

I just want say thank you for the feedback. "Who do you say that I am" is something Jesus asked his disciples. The poem, at least in my head, deals with the three monotheistic religions; Judaism, Christianity, and Islam, primarily dealing with the similarities and conflicts between them. T...
by Sybil
Wed Feb 08, 2012 6:32 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: Two swans
Replies: 19
Views: 3931

Re: Two swans

Hi! I enjoyed reading your poem! I do agree with a few other posters, though, that I don't think "mooning" is the best fit. That's probably just my own associations with the word, however.
by Sybil
Wed Feb 08, 2012 6:29 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: Return (Edited: still not sure)
Replies: 8
Views: 2885

Re: Return (Edited: still not sure)

Hi! I really enjoyed this poem quite a bit. Your descriptions were very strong; I could hear, see, and smell your poem.

I think you are a wonderful writer.
by Sybil
Wed Feb 08, 2012 6:29 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: Return (Edited: still not sure)
Replies: 8
Views: 2885

Re: Return (Edited: still not sure)

Hi! I really enjoyed this poem quite a bit. Your descriptions were very strong; I could hear, see, and smell your poem.

I think you are a really wonderful writer.
by Sybil
Wed Feb 08, 2012 6:20 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: Crows
Replies: 7
Views: 2083

Crows

We are all scholars of text. Twisted interpretations and the execution of their ideals. The bloodshed contradicts Itself. Curious minds ask Questions that unravel answers and overturn Traditions. Fly, and take refuge from the mischief of your fathers. Fools, think not of those still behind you. “Who...