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- Wed Feb 08, 2012 8:09 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Crows
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2083
Re: Crows
I just want say thank you for the feedback. "Who do you say that I am" is something Jesus asked his disciples. The poem, at least in my head, deals with the three monotheistic religions; Judaism, Christianity, and Islam, primarily dealing with the similarities and conflicts between them. T...
- Wed Feb 08, 2012 6:32 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Two swans
- Replies: 19
- Views: 3931
Re: Two swans
Hi! I enjoyed reading your poem! I do agree with a few other posters, though, that I don't think "mooning" is the best fit. That's probably just my own associations with the word, however.
- Wed Feb 08, 2012 6:29 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Return (Edited: still not sure)
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2885
Re: Return (Edited: still not sure)
Hi! I really enjoyed this poem quite a bit. Your descriptions were very strong; I could hear, see, and smell your poem.
I think you are a wonderful writer.
I think you are a wonderful writer.
- Wed Feb 08, 2012 6:29 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Return (Edited: still not sure)
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2885
Re: Return (Edited: still not sure)
Hi! I really enjoyed this poem quite a bit. Your descriptions were very strong; I could hear, see, and smell your poem.
I think you are a really wonderful writer.
I think you are a really wonderful writer.
- Wed Feb 08, 2012 6:20 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Crows
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2083
Crows
We are all scholars of text. Twisted interpretations and the execution of their ideals. The bloodshed contradicts Itself. Curious minds ask Questions that unravel answers and overturn Traditions. Fly, and take refuge from the mischief of your fathers. Fools, think not of those still behind you. “Who...