Poetry Forum

Now take my hand
down by the sand
we'll build a mountain to scale
if you should call
i'll break your fall
you my friend will never fail

HELP ME sit in silence your head is in pieces wanting to know whats round the corner starting to shiver you fear the worse no one to turn to hands glued to your head so you cant see whats really going on in front of your eyes help me escape throw me the rope you'll do anything for another chance Ple...

DESERVED huge chains stretch around your kneck weighed down with remorse and self-pity the same words echo around your skull "i didnt meant to!" over and over again would God take pity and strike you down? but perhaps sympathy is undeserved the life that was taken, the lives that were ruin...

I was tired last night and misunderstood your question, the only Doors song titles used were those two that you mentioned. thanks

JUST A PIECE OF PAPER i analyse a piece of paper i look at the small dots that make the text amazing if you think about it thousands of little dots making sense my attention is diverted to the surrounding white an area of the canvas left blank feels flat to touch but not if you look closer hold the ...

"Touch me "(on the Soft Parade album). Thanks for the feedback friend.

Hi Cameron,the poems about Jim Morrison of The Doors, Mr Mojo Risin is what he called himself at some point during his life(anagram of Jim Morrison). Jim longed to be a poet and moved to France only to die of a drug overdose shortly after. Thanks again Cameron , i have never wrote a poem like this b...

Hello Mr Risin hello mr risin did you break on through just like your song or was it the end ? did you choose to go? cos i think you did was it all too much or perhaps not enough? they made you rock your mind was poetic a colourful brain under the influence one last trip mr Risin a ticket to another...

Thanks Cameron, i know what you mean when you say that you would feel reluctant to feedback on a poem that is personal to the writer, however i would not be posting my poems on this site if didn't want feedback(good or bad). Writing poems that are personal to yourself or perhaps tell a story are not...

Whats wrong with telling and not showing, i can't see the problem. I like the poem very much angel tears.

Liked it very very much my friend. superb

I love you its time to re-discover the memory i recover i found i used to love her she found another man a person left in pieces broken heart, never eases but a love that never ceases i love you day by day but whatever makes you smile thats all i want all the while means your number i wont dial you ...

DEPRESSION

whats its like to be desired
whats it like to be touched
why is it you and not me
please love a man who loves

do you know what its like to be lonley
and have no other voice but you own
in a head full of words that depress me
a place so dark i call home

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do i need this heavy burden each and every day
will it always be so hard to find the words i need say
please persecute the loser as you laugh whilst you gain
if your really here to punish, tell me now what is your name

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cmon look at me
is there love here
can you answer
my hopes and fears
im gonna cry
and drink my tears
drown my soul
so im not here