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Surely I am showing how my life is now when I say: "Everyday I see you, In everything I do, You soul is drifting through my mind, And my heart cries out for you." And; "The emptiness inside me, Destroyed me when you were taken away, And the scar that binds you to my heart, Sheds tears...

Very good, very easy to read x

Hi there

I really like this poem as it relates to me. I also suffer from depression .I think you should lengthen it maybe explaining in more detail what it is like to feel this way. As you ask the questions and are brief on what you feel your depression is like.

A good start tho carry on!!

I'll write these words for you, my baby, At least I owe you that, Because no-one can replace you, Or even bring you back. You grew inside protected, From the world you thought you'd see, But now I'm living without you, And there's no-one to blame but me. Everyday I see you, In everything I do, You s...