Search found 187 matches
- Sat Jun 10, 2006 8:32 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Broken Crosses (now versed, punctuated, big letters as well)
- Replies: 11
- Views: 2536
- Sat Jun 10, 2006 7:31 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Haiku Train
- Replies: 7785
- Views: 1606630
- Fri Jun 09, 2006 6:29 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Haiku Train
- Replies: 7785
- Views: 1606630
- Fri Jun 09, 2006 5:51 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Sunderland 19
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1739
- Fri Jun 09, 2006 4:39 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: 1.2.3.4
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2434
- Fri Jun 09, 2006 4:29 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Haiku Train
- Replies: 7785
- Views: 1606630
- Fri Jun 09, 2006 4:24 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: John Wayne (of Ashton-u-Lyne)
- Replies: 8
- Views: 3090
- Fri Jun 09, 2006 4:23 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Messing around
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2183
- Thu Jun 08, 2006 8:40 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Sunderland 19
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1739
Sunderland 19
Old lady, crouching, crusted, confined to your self-rusting pool, confounded by the rainbows and dust vying for tension at your feet. Memories cast in that clunking heart of iron; of gliding, sliding your way through your younger years, intent on pleasing your groom. Deep cuts left you screaming, sc...
- Thu Jun 08, 2006 6:12 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Gort 2006
- Replies: 11
- Views: 2772
- Thu Jun 08, 2006 6:10 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: .
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1178
- Thu Jun 08, 2006 6:00 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Waynesday
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1187
- Thu Jun 08, 2006 5:56 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Gort 2006
- Replies: 11
- Views: 2772
- Thu Jun 08, 2006 5:42 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Stuff
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2317
- Thu Jun 08, 2006 5:36 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: 5.9 Perspective
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2249
Yep, nice one Keith. Agree with some of the above, but feel a comma can be used wherever you want in poetry; putting pauses where you want, so that it comes across to the reader in the way you intended. I'd hate to think that language rules were impairing communication - defeating their own object. ...
- Thu Jun 08, 2006 5:22 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: The Unbalanced
- Replies: 1
- Views: 889
- Thu Jun 08, 2006 5:11 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Broken Crosses (now versed, punctuated, big letters as well)
- Replies: 11
- Views: 2536
- Thu Jun 08, 2006 5:00 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: such a bore
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1707
- Thu Jun 08, 2006 4:54 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Cornwall Dream
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2234
- Thu Jun 08, 2006 4:46 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Rhythm
- Replies: 12
- Views: 3923
- Thu Jun 08, 2006 4:12 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Haiku Train
- Replies: 7785
- Views: 1606630
- Wed Jun 07, 2006 9:03 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Caving
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1839
- Wed Jun 07, 2006 8:52 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: woman work the water
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2295
- Wed Jun 07, 2006 8:50 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Amalgamating (something strange, 1994)
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1919
- Wed Jun 07, 2006 8:32 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Haiku Train
- Replies: 7785
- Views: 1606630