Poetry Forum

Thanks a lot for the constructive criticism! This was my first poem and I wrote this before learning about techniques. I feel like If I can learn all about poetry and rewrite this, then it will be an amazing poem. Again, thanks! P.S all of the grammar/spelling mistakes were intentional but the puncu...

I am new to this. This poem is original. This is more of a spoken word poem, but I would still like feedback. This is the first poem I have every wrote. Free verse/prose, and it's kinda long but please read the whole thing lol. PS it may be a little confusing....I don't know much about poetic techni...

I am new to this. This poem is original. This is more of a spoken word poem, but I would still like feedback. This is the first poem I have every wrote. Free verse/prose, and it's kinda long but please read the whole thing lol. PS it may be a little confusing....I don't know much about poetic techni...