Poetry Forum

Second poem for the forum, hope you enjoy, tried something a bit different so fingers crossed :) Dew gloss, wet shine, The sober russet tones, Of wilting past, no more new. Cracking golds, and fading youth, Burning bright colour, but even embers fade, In time, time will have its way. All things sett...

Thank you all very much for the advise, it's most welcome I'm going to post another poem shortly so fingers crossed, hoe everyone's well and thanks again,

Joe

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Yes I did miss spell pray

Hello David thank you for your thoughts. In answer to your question yes I do read poetry, and a lot of it. Currently I am reading my way through the works of Dylan Thomas. I'm not sure if it is fair to plainly state that my poem 'does not work', it is not to your taste, but personally I am quite hap...

Hi guys, and thank you very much for the feedback. Really nervous about the whole thing so nice to get feedback constructively and so quickly :) after reflection I personally started to realise I wasn't happy with it, here's my second attempt, hope you like it: Moonlight falls upon Green Bay, Twenty...

Hi everyone, this is my second poem ever so really keen to find out what people think, hope you enjoy. Moonlight falls upon Green Bay, Twenty third chime of dark, cold day, Man upon cobble stone kneels and preys, And weeps alone, for she wont stay, A debt to love he now must pay, Turned back, the se...

Hi all, this my first post, just read the rules and it suggests that a new member should comment on two posts before posting their own work. As a layman, and a newbie I don't think I'm in any position to critique anyone's work, but for what it is worth I really like this poem, I like the way it flow...