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I can see now I believe a few things I missed. Thanks to the previous post 1lankest.
It has helped my understanding.

Regards
Tom

The subjective conciousness Or the hive mind, Is their perception Just like mine? Or not we realise A jot about each other? Lonely as a man Who misunderstands his brother. Sit in a room of friends But still be on your own Is reality ;to live. To truly be alone. Or are there rarities When you can cro...

Presumably referring to jealously which has caused a rift between you and someone else? Hence the darling. I enjoyed the last stanza " The welding torch which unzipped the seam of us " The Great white hunter confuses me a little, I am unsure this is because I am fairly new. Or that the abs...

Hello

I have very recently started to produce any sort of material, and believe that this seems like a good forum to get some critique.
I hope to grow to know many of you. Also, to learn with and from you.

Thomas

Hello First post on forum so hello to all. I tend to agree with cynwulf about s3 l2. Although, I am but a novice so please take my opinion with many salty pinches. Possibly try to change some of the words for similar meanings, see if it changes the feel or the rhythm . It would be something I would ...