Poetry Forum

(wow i feel dumb,) after looking up some words (pirouetting:marionette)
i realized what was going on

the "a calico commotion..." places images of cat like movements in my head and it makes me smile.

When winter petal walks
some say "sweet spring!"
Under gentle rain and gorgeous misty moon
a girl is aching like a luscious bruise, drained of all beauty.

When the evening is dry and raw,
she shakes, then falls, a sad women
with a white wet bouquet of skin,
parting like delicate lace.

i just wanted to say hello
and let you know im here to improve my writting
i kind of feel like im in a rut so i'm hoping that reading what other people have written will help me see my way through

*shrug*