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- Sun Apr 20, 2014 8:24 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: A Fall of Moon dust (revision)
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Re: A Fall of Moon dust
Hi, Kev I am new here so please bear with me. I gravitated towards your poem as I love moon themed poems and yours is very descriptive. A fall of Moon dust in the bright Earthlight. [Is Earth light two words or one, not sure? Or hyphenated?] [Perhaps 'Moon dust falls in the bright Earthlight'] Buzz ...