Poetry Forum

Remove your sunglasses and look to the world again You will see that there is no darkness You just need to remove the blackness and then you will have no pain that is what I was telling everyone and I know that I was lying *** Oh my dear life is fair you will find your love somewhere he will care li...

i liked the topic
and the rhyming

(Smells of food on busy streets summon hungry men to eat. )


keep it up

i liked the logic of passion

1-His breath on my face

2-His hands and body close

3-He exists, he is real

But only in my dreams



will done

thanks alot

i ll put your comments
in my mind

Hello barrie

thanks

i ll blame my tools/ connections

I can smell politics in the air

thanx

It is a nice deed The topic is Interesting (alter ego ) I liked ( He stalks through night-time forests seeking prey to tear with tooth and nail. Sluicing blood from matted hair in monsoon storms. ) There is a nice painted pic in that one above I don’t know y I felt so sad when I read the end It is i...

I liked the storyline And the hole love scene But I don’t think that you need to repeat the meaning Or to explain to the readers what they already know You don’t need to say ( It’s the flicker of a match) because you mentioned that (He lights up a match). And you don’t need to say ( They are once ag...

thank you dear calxaed for enlightening me with your comments

(( is english your first language?))

No eng. is not my first lang
but i ll try my best
next time

thanx again

hi all that is my 1st poem hope u like it thanx >>>>>>>> Once upon a time Once upon a time there was a girl She was crying, but no one was there She cried, she cried, she was afraid She saw a shadow coming ahead She thought that it was a shadow of a monster And yes, it was Her body swung in his four...