Poetry Forum

My first critique on the site. Liked the tone of the poem and its simplicity. Would start on the second line over and over again is a bit of a cliche. as if I'm a teen is a stronger start. Would replace record with disc . Would delete But and fantastically . Humming the middle bit could be a refrain...

Hi I've visited Yeats' grave in Sligo and Paul Valery's in Sete, but in Valery's case I preferred the place. The same could not be said of Yeats who is probably my favourite poet. I'm also a Kei Miller and Liz Berry fan so this is part of my introduction. I'm a Northerner though I lived in London fo...