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windswept, clinging onto the last few remaining tantalising roots lying on peat, streaming down the rock face where nature intertwines it with other plants, laced weaved into cloaks covering the bare earth keeping it warm and dry protecting the rock and plants from natural cruel storms that leach ch...

as per the other comments leave "track" in there cos as someone else said it adds to the character in the piece it gives it time and distance as well as a sound effect. I also agree in that the preamble should be lost --- there's no need for it - the title and the main main body of the poe...

Thank you for the warm welcome :) The European Union makes between 75 and 80% of all the laws in the UK and the people of the UK have never voted in any form for EU laws to be British laws. There is going to be an In / Out referendum in the UK over whether or not to join the Eurozone properly, even ...

Hi suzanne :) love it :) it's got a sarcastic tone to it, almost like it's saying "you used to be like that and now you're not" - the paintbrush instead of the pencil, almost that the pencil is a reject which wasn't good enough it's got an underlying sadness to it - a fragility - the shoes...

vote out, not in
don't let them take it back
put the European Union in the bin
vote out, not in
get our country out of this tie in
give the European Union the sack
vote out, not in
don't let them take it back

lose the first word as the rest of this piece stands on its own. loving the visuals too